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යාපනේ චාවකච්චේරියේ
සාමයේ ඒ නයින් මාවතේ
නුඹ තියපු අඩි සලකුණු දිගේ
ඇවිදිනා මම රාහුල නොවේ...

එදා සුදු පරවියන් අතර බිම වැටී
මිදී කඳුලෙන් උපන් ලේ කැටී
බදා උන් පොළව කාටත් නොදී
අද නුඹට ඒ පොළව ණය ගැතී...

අම්මාටත් කියා අබිනික්මන්
හැර ගියත් අත් නොහැර රජ කම්
ගැබ්බර උනු කුසට එපිටින්
දනිමි නුඹ දුටු නිමිති කිමවන්...

සුලැඟිල්ල කොහේදැයි සොයමින්
ආ ගිය කතන්දර කියමින්
නුඹ එක්ක මං ඉස්කෝලේ ගිහින්
තව හීන නම් ඇති කොයි තරම්...

කර පිටින් මහ සේනා එක්ක
සුදු කොඩි වනා දිනා ආ යුද්ධ
පැන් වැඩූ අම්මා තනියෙන්ම
සක්විති නුඹයි නැති පරසිද්ධ...

තවමත් ඉඳ හිටක ඇවිදින්
නින්දෙන් මා හඬවන ගමන්
රහසේම ළිප නිවන කඳුලින්
පතිණි මවුණුත් බලා පලයන්...

හැබැහින් කවදාවත් නොදුටු
දැන් උස් කර දඬු වලට නතු
හැමදාමත් නුඹට නිවණ පැතු
රාහුල වගෙ නොවෙයි නුබෙ පුතු....




පසු සටහන : එළකිරි එකේම මල්ලි කෙනෙක් මීට කාලෙකට ඉහතදී මගෙන් නිර්මාණයක් කරලා ඉල්ලුවා. එයාගේ තාත්තා රට වෙනුවෙන් ජිවිතේ පුජා කරපු වීර සොල්දාදුවෙක්. නමුත් මට ඒ දවස් වල හිතට දැනෙන තරමේ වචන ටිකක් නිර්මාණය උනේ නැහැ කොයි තරම් උත්සහ කලත්. ඒ වගේ ජීවිතෙත් සමු ගත්ත හැම සොල්දාදුවෙක් වෙනුවෙනුත් එයාලගේ ආදරය රැකවරණය නොලැබුණු දාහක් දුවරු පුතුන් වෙනුවෙන් මේ නිර්මාණය උපහාරයක් වේවා කියල ප්‍රර්ථනා කරනවා. අපේ රට බේරා ගන්න ජීවිත පුජා කරපු සියලුම දෙනාට අවසානයේ උතුම් වූ නිර්වාණය අවබෝධ වේවා කියලත් ප්‍රර්ථනා කරනවා.


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කියන්න වචන නෑ අක්කේ... ගොඩක් පිං අක්කෙ ඒවාගේම ගොඩක් ස්තුතියි ඉල්ලීම ඉෂ්ටකලාට.
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කියන්න වචන නෑ අක්කේ... ගොඩක් පිං අක්කෙ ඒවාගේම ගොඩක් ස්තුතියි ඉල්ලීම ඉෂ්ටකලාට.
පිං එපා මල්ලි. ඔයාගේ හිතේ තියන දේවල් මේ වචන ටිකකින් කියන්න බැරි වග මම දන්නවා.


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You have a way of putting words together really well written and presented in a way that will convey the emotional portion of the poem.
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You have a way of putting words together really well written and presented in a way that will convey the emotional portion of the poem.
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