Lets make a rhyming poem...

Lil_chica

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Simply add something to rhyme with the last word...
If we all do this right ...we will have the longest rhyming poem ever! so yeah make it funny, sweet, cheeky...anythin...jst make sure it rhyms

Note: when doing so ..copy the existing bit and add your own bit to it...which obviously makes it easier for us all to understand the poem...Cheers! ;)

Elakiri Poem :

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme​
 

DJ.Parker

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Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
 

Tissaka

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lasanka said:
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
Yte gtef ihdta lkien anfs tk liangeu mne fuilashina rlahj

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
 

lasanka

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DJ.Parker said:
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
time moving so slow it could virtually bend
 

lasanka

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DJ.Parker said:
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
time moving so slow it could virtually bend
 

Lil_chica

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Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
 

lasanka

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Lil_chica said:
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
 

DJ.Parker

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lasanka said:
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train
 

lasanka

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DJ.Parker said:
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still palys on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong!
 
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DJ.Parker

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lasanka said:
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still palys on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong!

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
 

lasanka

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DJ.Parker said:
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..
 

Lil_chica

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Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
 

lasanka

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Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
 

Lil_chica

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Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
 

lasanka

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Oct 19, 2006
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Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
 

Lil_chica

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May 28, 2006
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Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat