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Message: <blockquote data-quote="sachinaussie" data-source="post: 17214097" data-attributes="member: 501617">1. Instead of using "But", use However.2. Use a variety of sentence patterns. (Another problem related using the computer is the fact that , Another issue related with the computers is that ) Examiner will count both of these sentence structures as one.3. You can use "Moreover", "In Addition" to state more problems. (Another problem related....., Another issue related with.......)4. Proofreading is a must at the end. Keep some extra time for corrections after writing, thereby you can get rid of your minor errors.5. Don't use words like "good", "bad" (A good solution to adopt for these problems.......). You can say "One possible solution would be to......."6. Use commas appropriately. (While using a computer in childhood opens the doors for a future digital life style, it brings some negative effects as well. )7. Don't use same phrases again and again. You need to impress your examiner the richness of your vocabulary. (digital life style, You can use "Modern life style")Other than that you have well addressed the given task with valid reasons and also with possible solutions. Just minor errors and you will be able to score more than 7 if you improve yourself further.</blockquote>

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