My dear kasp,
Keep it up.. these are the real poems what we have seen from your threads. Anybody can say anything but we know that you are a very good composer of songs and poems. Don`t be negetive on somebody`s jelosy expressions.

My dear kasp,
Keep it up.. these are the real poems what we have seen from your threads. Anybody can say anything but we know that you are a very good composer of songs and poems. Don`t be negetive on somebody`s jelosy expressions.

My dear kasp,
Keep it up.. these are the real poems what we have seen from your threads. Anybody can say anything but we know that you are a very good composer of songs and poems. Don`t be negetive on somebody`s jelosy expressions.
what in the hell is there to be jealous of ?? shitty writing? inability to accept criticism?
ane??ay me tharaha aran.anika kawda oyage nama dala a comment 1 damme.
oyada jealousy comments damme 
aiyo oyanan kawi liyannepa.

oyala wage aya me field 1ta match wen na.kawiyak sinduwak nisadasak free eke liyanna puluwan kiyala dan nathi oya 
kohomada ane anith ayata bana kiyanne
lajja na.oya koy adishtanenn da comment kare kiyala dan therenava.
oya kiwwa nisa kiyanan.man oyage poems baluwa
honday apayata.mokada oya poet kenek nemene
wadakata nathi therumak nathi oluwak nathi thaman gana adimannen hithan inna moda gahak.
man dan igena ganna aluth guruwataraya ada oya gana kiwwa.mamamy sir oyage poems through giya.oya typical writer kenek witaray.
lu.onna man neme kiwwe.lankawe praveena kala karuwek.
thoppiya dagannakan thama math balan hitiye 


Once some one reach your heart

Nice. You can really write. these poems are beautiful.
Once some one reach your heart
Once some one touch you soul
even though u know not him
he becomes the beat of ur heart
Every minute u think of him
Every minute u live with him
doesn't matter how far u r
bridge of love will lead u there
Nice. You can really write. these poems are beautiful.
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thanks a lot
its simple and really nicewow !! thanks.a nice poem.lv it.thanks a lot
its simple and really nice



oyata mokada ochara thada wenneane??ay me tharaha aran.anika kawda oyage nama dala a comment 1 damme.
oyada jealousy comments damme
aiyo oyanan kawi liyannepa.
oyala wage aya me field 1ta match wen na.kawiyak sinduwak nisadasak free eke liyanna puluwan kiyala dan nathi oya
kohomada ane anith ayata bana kiyanne
lajja na.oya koy adishtanenn da comment kare kiyala dan therenava.
oya kiwwa nisa kiyanan.man oyage poems baluwa
honday apayata.mokada oya poet kenek nemene
wadakata nathi therumak nathi oluwak nathi thaman gana adimannen hithan inna moda gahak.
man dan igena ganna aluth guruwataraya ada oya gana kiwwa.mamamy sir oyage poems through giya.oya typical writer kenek witaray.
lu.onna man neme kiwwe.lankawe praveena kala karuwek.
thoppiya dagannakan thama math balan hitiye
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U r welcome.
Not as good as urs. I did write English poems sometime back. But not anymore. Keep up the good writing u will become a good poetess like Emily Dickinson.![]()
man liyanan kamathi nidahas widihata
kawruth widihata nemey.man godak simple widihata samahara loku hangeemak denna uthsaha karanava.
man perfect na.a unata mama nikamata liyapuwa godak agayeemata lak wenna gaththama man podi kale indan liwwa.liyana kenekta waradak kiwwama aka hadaganna one.ehema kiyapu ona kenekta man thanks kiyala hina wenava.man aka hadagannava.ath jeewitha kaletama ekkenek kiwwama mata liyanan ba kiwwama aththata man mage guruwaruntath kiwwa mechara kal math eka hitapu.man mata bari wada karanna yan na.man sing karanna yan na.man dance karanna yan na.mata pihitau de man karanne.
issara man danna bara wachana okkoma dala liwwe.ath hamoma ehema dewal langa nawathin na.ada poem 1k kenek kiywanne kalathuakin.man decision 1k gaththa.thanks 
U r welcome.
Not as good as urs. I did write English poems sometime back. But not anymore. Keep up the good writing u will become a good poetess like Emily Dickinson.![]()

why do we need to beat around the bush? I know I'm the only one who commented negatively on this thread, so that comment must be directed at me. you look very amused by it, which is a good thing though. can't you atleast be straight?
and your 'praveena' new sir may be correct about me, and he didn't say anything that I'm not aware of. and I don't write to be on a 'specific' field or to be a 'poet'. that's your thing luv, not mine.
btw, just outa sheer curiosity, is it possible that I may know the names of these 'praveena' people who is apparently complementing the shit out of you?![]()

U ARE PERFECT![]()
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may be you require 'lessons' from 'praveena' teachers in 'that' field I assume
man liyanan kamathi nidahas widihata
kawruth widihata nemey.man godak simple widihata samahara loku hangeemak denna uthsaha karanava.
man perfect na.a unata mama nikamata liyapuwa godak agayeemata lak wenna gaththama man podi kale indan liwwa.liyana kenekta waradak kiwwama aka hadaganna one.ehema kiyapu ona kenekta man thanks kiyala hina wenava.man aka hadagannava.ath jeewitha kaletama ekkenek kiwwama mata liyanan ba kiwwama aththata man mage guruwaruntath kiwwa mechara kal math eka hitapu.man mata bari wada karanna yan na.man sing karanna yan na.man dance karanna yan na.mata pihitau de man karanne.
man english literature waladi igena gaththa de thama english poems waladi use karanne.man grade 9 waladi magema pothak eli dakkuwa.akata wichara godak paththara wala giya.etakota mama awayn hari waradi hadagaththa.mata ba kenekge poem 1k diha balala waradak kiyanna.flow wenna liyanna puluwan ona kenekta.ay bari??man study karapu nathi kenek nemey.thanks oyata.issara man danna bara wachana okkoma dala liwwe.ath hamoma ehema dewal langa nawathin na.ada poem 1k kenek kiywanne kalathuakin.man decision 1k gaththa.thanks
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. meka kiyewwama mage hithata enna mix feeling ekak. mage athin waradi deyak wath kiyawunada. mama qwe thawath emily dickinson kenek wenna kiyala newei. e wagema honda kiwindiyak wenna kiyala.
. mama waradi deyak wath kiwwada?

. mamath kale english lit. Eth ewage techniques nam dan mathaka na. eth mama thamath asama wishaya english lit. 
. mama thamath asai poison tree, nobody , stopping by the woods poems walata. ewage therumata. DID I say SOMETHING WRONG
. I NEVER SAID YPUR POEMS ARE BAD.

Ay mehema deyak qwe.. meka kiyewwama mage hithata enna mix feeling ekak. mage athin waradi deyak wath kiyawunada. mama qwe thawath emily dickinson kenek wenna kiyala newei. e wagema honda kiwindiyak wenna kiyala.
. mama waradi deyak wath kiwwada?
. mamath kale english lit. Eth ewage techniques nam dan mathaka na. eth mama thamath asama wishaya english lit.
. mama thamath asai poison tree, nobody , stopping by the woods poems walata. ewage therumata. DID I say SOMETHING WRONG
. I NEVER SAID YPUR POEMS ARE BAD.
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the peacock may be turning in her grave now![]()
Ay mehema deyak qwe.. meka kiyewwama mage hithata enna mix feeling ekak. mage athin waradi deyak wath kiyawunada. mama qwe thawath emily dickinson kenek wenna kiyala newei. e wagema honda kiwindiyak wenna kiyala.
. mama waradi deyak wath kiwwada?
. mamath kale english lit. Eth ewage techniques nam dan mathaka na. eth mama thamath asama wishaya english lit.
. mama thamath asai poison tree, nobody , stopping by the woods poems walata. ewage therumata. DID I say SOMETHING WRONG
. I NEVER SAID YPUR POEMS ARE BAD.
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hey i know.read my message again 
man, just relax and enjoy the self flattery![]()



What???????????? What the hell was that suppose to mean?
Ohhh. Seems like u have experience???![]()

ane na.hey,me liwwe wena kenek gana.man oyata kiwwe a kena gana.mage shit writing gana comment karapu kenek ganahey i know.read my message again
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Mama deparak kiyawala therum ganna bari nisai ehama qwe. Oya oya kiyanne twisted ganada?
yep.she is perfect
im a bullshit artist