~සුදු නෙළුම~

[LakshmanP]

lassana sunadara nirmanayak mithraya

ketiyen kiyanawanam ithamath anargay

gaburata widiya haki nirmanayak ,ma widi siyalu de akuru nokirima pilibadawa amanapa nowanna

 

[ronsilva]

The themes of ur poems r gr8.
Ur mind eye can grab sm subtle issues of the society which we r failure to see.

symbols.language & other poetic stuff cn touch smone mind .

Simple but gr8 , cz the simple diction dsnt harm the quality of poem.

It a sign of a well experienced writer.

Contrast z the best poetic technique of the poem ,thr no scars of using it ,it means perfect use of contrast.

simply SUPERB
As always feel over use of free style,but it dsnt harm my feelings to understand the poem.

thx for your valuable comment sis.....

 

[ronsilva]

lassana sunadara nirmanayak mithraya

ketiyen kiyanawanam ithamath anargay

gaburata widiya haki nirmanayak ,ma widi siyalu de akuru nokirima pilibadawa amanapa nowanna

bohoma sthuthi sahodaraya...mama obe nirmanath itha ihalin agaya karanwa..

obata rahata liyanna puluwan........

sahodaraya api maga balagena inne oyage deweni nirmanaya labenakam...

obata jaya!!

 

[Kasmadumala]

ethamath sarthaka.nirmanayak ayya....
man hithane meka ayya.....athdekemen liyapu ekak wenna oni......

 

[ronsilva]

ethamath sarthaka.nirmanayak ayya....
man hithane meka ayya.....athdekemen liyapu ekak wenna oni......

athdakeemaknam newei malli....

manasehi chitranaya woo roopa pelak nirmanayata peraluwa..

bohomathma sthuthi adahaswalata malliyo...

 

[ronsilva]

Harima Lassana.....,lassanata liya unu nirmanayak.bohomathma apoorui aiya.

බොහොම ස්තුතියි මල්ලි

 

[Doly]

I love your written style aiye..
there are alot means alot

as usual SUPERB poem by you

 

[roshani111]

AIYE OYA LAGA THIYENA ADAHAS NAM APURUI.....KAWIYA KIYAWADDI HADAWATHIN A HAMA DEYAKMA MAWILA PENAWA.........AIYAGE UTHSAHAYA ATHI SARTHAKAI.......EK AKATA AIYA ADAMBARAYAK................

 

[archirasika]

maxxa poem bro.... kiyanna wachana naa...

parakku unata sorry machan...mama dan ek enna echchara asa naha...

 

[ronsilva]

I love your written style aiye..
there are alot means alot

as usual SUPERB poem by you

bohomathma sthuthi nangiya oyage adahaswalata....

 

[ronsilva]

AIYE OYA LAGA THIYENA ADAHAS NAM APURUI.....KAWIYA KIYAWADDI HADAWATHIN A HAMA DEYAKMA MAWILA PENAWA.........AIYAGE UTHSAHAYA ATHI SARTHAKAI.......EK AKATA AIYA ADAMBARAYAK................

bohomathma sthuthi nangiya oyage vatina adahaswalata...

nangiya digatama liyanna one..

mama eda kiwwa wage ida labunu gaman apita nirmanayak denna one honde....

 

[ronsilva]

maxxa poem bro.... kiyanna wachana naa...

parakku unata sorry machan...mama dan ek enna echchara asa naha...

awulak naha macho...samahara welawata matath oka wenawa..

mama pm ekak ewwa balala reply ekak dennako...

bohoma sthuthi umbe adahaswalata.....

 

[j2l]

godaaak lassana nirmanayk ron aiyya ....

 

[ronsilva]

godaaak lassana nirmanayk ron aiyya ....

bohoma sthuthi malliyo