My First Poem ♥ ♥ ♥

[Mrknight]

Nice machan,,, keep up da good wrk...

 

[twisted]

not bad bro keep writing

 

[RuwinRTY]

ok its a nice one keep it up sometime u could end up somewhere else
jest kidding

hehe
thx

 

[RuwinRTY]

hehehe

ela ela...nice one...bq ground tikak light color danna..thawath hondai ethakota...

thx
bt mama PS danne naa
meeka kareth paint wage SW ekakin

 

[Clerk_Kent]

Nice One Keep writing

 

[soona]

ela ela keep it up

 

[RuwinRTY]

Nice machan,,, keep up da good wrk...

thx

not bad bro keep writing

thx awantha ayya
meeka poem ekak widiyata ganna puluwanda

 

[RuwinRTY]

Nice One Keep writing

moko affa avatar eka maaru kaleee
andura gannath baaa
issella eka hondai

thx for da comments

 

[ac2000]

Nice one...

 

[dilrasan]

aa ela ela...

 

[somadasa]

elaaaaaaaaz

 

[twisted]

thx



thx awantha ayya
meeka poem ekak widiyata ganna puluwanda

guess you can...write something longer ..its always better practice

 

[789]

ලස්සනයි

 

[Zaku]

wow...patta malz..
Keep writing......

 

[RuwinRTY]

elaaaaaaaaz

thx

guess you can...write something longer ..its always better practice

hehe k
i knw da poem is 2 shrt
so i made font large

ලස්සනයි

thx harry

 

[RuwinRTY]

wow...patta malz..
Keep writing......

mokada affa mee patta kiyala use karanne
patta needa
hehe thx kavi akki

 

[Zaku]

mokada affa mee patta kiyala use karanne
patta needa

hehe thx kavi akki

haha patta kuwe patta nisa..
wc malz..

 

[RuwinRTY]

haha patta kuwe patta nisa..
wc malz..

mama tharahai
ai kiyala kiyanne naa ne

 

[RuwinRTY]

ela ela keep it up

thx man

 

[RuwinRTY]

Nice one...

thx AC