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[whooff]

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m not a good poet as i always say to others. yet i love to try things..

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[Mystery]

nicely written

 

[whooff]

nicely written

thnx

 

[Rovin]

Nice one Bro

 

[RapidDark]

yh nice

 

[twisted]

it rather appeared pointless...and it really made no sense.

you don't have to try so hard for it to rhyme..just have a meaning that would paint us a picture and simple lines would do...

praise you for trying and keep writing..good luck.

 

[whooff]

Nice one Bro

Thnx macho

yh nice

Thnx dude

it rather appeared pointless...and it really made no sense.

you don't have to try so hard for it to rhyme..just have a meaning that would paint us a picture and simple lines would do...

praise you for trying and keep writing..good luck.

appreciate ur comments brother.. yeah it's totally pointless..but it has a meaning behind it.. read it twice or thrice then u'll get it.. i dint try to rhyme it so hardly it just i wanted it that way...
thnx alot for the encouragement

 

[rockcity68]

nice one bro keep up

 

[lmw]

awsme lokkaa...nicely writtn...keep writin,,,!!!

 

[whooff]

nice one bro keep up

thnx bro..

awsme lokkaa...nicely writtn...keep writin,,,!!!

thnx poddaaa

 

[Suvin1122]

Fabulous....+++

 

[whooff]

Fabulous....+++

Thnx alot

 

[pantaloon]

poem contains smkind of a rythm, love that rythm.
the style is different
novelty z there
theme is different
try to write more,cz u hav a gud style, ur style cn derive the reader into new volitions

 

[whooff]

poem contains smkind of a rythm, love that rythm.
the style is different
novelty z there
theme is different
try to write more,cz u hav a gud style, ur style cn derive the reader into new volitions

appreciate your thoughts thnx alot...!

 

[Anjala_88]

I am not a expert in poem criticizing bt I appreciate the effort u made yourself to rhyme the lines in poems. bt I felt like there's so many "-less" in ur poem...Bt I like the simply meaning in it...
Keep writing more bro

 

[whooff]

I am not a expert in poem criticizing bt I appreciate the effort u made yourself to rhyme the lines in poems. bt I felt like there's so many "-less" in ur poem...Bt I like the simply meaning in it...
Keep writing more bro

thnx alot...value ur thoughts

 

[cspmaxx]

nice one bro..
keep written

 

[whooff]

nice one bro..
keep written

thnx alot broh