Nice one sis...! :) keep writing more here
I have heard the English one before
"If one day you feel like crying...
Call me.
I don't promise that I will make you laugh,
But I can cry with you
If one day you want to run away--
Don't be afraid...
I am not a expert in poem criticizing bt I appreciate the effort u made yourself to rhyme the lines in poems. bt I felt like there's so many "-less" in ur poem...Bt I like the simply meaning in it...
Keep writing more bro :)