ඔබට ලියූ හයිකු කවිය l A haiku for you

chiraa

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x-pert said:
Meaning eka api hithaaganna ooni machang...

Dan kiyamu

Mage kalisama
Mora soorana wassa
Heta naha iskole

kiyuwoth nikan uba kalisama eliye daala thibuna. and eeka wassata ahu una so iskole yanna baha... Anna eh wage thamai mama nam Haiku gana danne. Maybe mama waradi athi.. kaviyek genma ahala balanna ooni.

Maybe Chiraa can correct me.

mama may hena hallak answer ekata gaha gaha hitiye.:rofl: dan one naha eka ehenam:P

oya thiyenne .short and sweet anser ekak:D
nothing to corect there. :)

Aththama kiwwoth Haiku ekata theruma mekai kiyala point karanna baha..:yes:

Eka decide wenne, poem eka balana kenage life experiences, attitutes ekkai.
eya eka balala, thamunge life ekakth ekka compare karala, hitha gannawa meka thamai poem eke theruma kiyala.
Ekkanek dena definiton eka thawa kenekta relevant wenne na.:yes:
 

chiraa

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Boman said:
Lassanai machan....First time EK eke haiku ekak dakke...
:):)

Thanks machan.
Eth mekata haiku kiyala nama damme kawiye athule thiyena meaning eka elitaya gannai:)
basically meka nisadasak;)
 

chiraa

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Boman said:
Japaneselage num Haiku liyanna wenama Kramayak thiyanawa kiyala mama ahala thiyanawa machan:) Anith languages walata ee rules balapanne nahalu...Japaneselage num niyamitha akuru pramanayak thiyala liyanna one peliyakata(Like 5,7 &5)

:yes:
5 7 5 samahara welawata wenas wenawa machan:yes:


Boman said:
anith eka thamai Haiku walin hungak welawata gamburu artha pennanawa adui..edineda siduweem wenas akarayen thamai idiripath karanne..
Like
An old pond!
A frog jumps in-
The sound of water

e wunath machan .. samahara than waladi godak gamburu dewal kiyana thanuth thiyeanwa..


ex- masaoka. ge kawiyak.
Always someone resting there
a lone rock
in the summer field

dan meka diha kenekta baluwama hithenna puluwan .. may kiyala thiyenne kenek galak uda idan innawa kiyana eka kiyala..
(mathupitin gaththoth)

eth thawa tikak gamburata giyoth meken kiyanne minis hitha gana..
mokada minis hitha kisima welawaka hiswa thiyenne naha. hama welawema active wenawane.. Anna eheham therumakuth denna puluwan.
eka sithuwilllak yanakota.. e wenuwata thaawa ekak enawa.. anna ehema therumakuth ganna puluwan:yes:

Zen agame samahara karunu uganwannath haiku pawichchi karala thiyenawa :yes:




 

rash87

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kaviyanam hondai, habai mama meevala specialist kenek neme:P
kaviya kiyevva, pitin rasa vinda, echcharai:D
 

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chiraa said:
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Small phrases . huge meaning. give a guess about the meaning;)

:D:D:D:D
lassanai;) meaning gana gana nam..:dull::dull: :dull: :P
 

nagaya

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හොදයි හොදයි ;දැන් කට්ටියම සිංහලෙන් වැඩ ; එළකිරි !!
 

nagaya

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pamithK said:
1. babek hamba wenakan couple ekak innawa:oo:
2. yuddeta giya soldier kenek enakan amma thaththai balan innawa..:dull:
3. Exam result enakan innawa:P
3 වැනි එක නම් නියමයි :)
 

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maleemsg said:
heh chirooo
den sinhalan neda topic daanneth hoda hodamata kiyawanna puluwan..!

ane mama haiku gena wediya danne nehe!
tred eke ayage adahas beluwa e kata thanx
eken godak dewal hitha gaththa!
මාලි අක්කේ; දැන් සිංහල පේනවද?
 

chiraa

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Sasana Boteju said:
Wonderful keep going

Thanks

ereshthush said:
hmm nice one :yes: :D

Thanks machang

dewasmitha said:
couple ekak marry karanna innawa e unata eyalata prashna athi e dewal hari yanakam e denna balagena innawa da???:D

80% - 85%k withara hari;)
thawa dewal add wenna one..

madhu4gr said:
meka hitaganna amarui wage... eeth...lassanai :D

echchara amru na;)
Thanks machan comment ekata:)

hemalmenaka said:
a thouching poem, cant understand exactly what u r saying though!
awsome thread i should say.

You have to look in the last lines;)
Thanks for the nice comment mate:)

Malinga said:
apuru padavalak. matath ithin meekata hari theerumaknum denna baha. vivahayakin pasu siddi daamayak da visthara venne?

eeta kalin wena deyak gana wennath puluwan;)


rash87 said:
kaviyanam hondai, habai mama meevala specialist kenek neme:P
kaviya kiyevva, pitin rasa vinda, echcharai:D

specialist wenna one na ban;):P
Kawiya rasa winda nam echcharai:D
thanks machang:)
 

chiraa

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isharackp said:
maxa ne ... elakiri...:D :D

sorry ban . I missed your one earlier:D
Thanks machang:D

nagaya said:
හොදයි හොදයි ;දැන් කට්ටියම සිංහලෙන් වැඩ ; එළකිරි !!

සිංහලයෝ වුණාම ඉතින් සිංහලෙන් වැඩ කරන්න ඕනැනේ නාගයෝ..:D

 

chiraa

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maleemsg said:
heh chirooo
den sinhalan neda topic daanneth hoda hodamata kiyawanna puluwan..!

ane mama haiku gena wediya danne nehe!
tred eke ayage adahas beluwa e kata thanx
eken godak dewal hitha gaththa!

issarath damma . ko ithin umbalata ewa penne nane e kale:dull::P
menna wadak. japan igena ganna manussaya haiku gana danne nahalu..:rolleyes::rofl:

meka hakiu ekak nemei malees. poem eke theruma eliyata ganna thamai topic eka ehehma damme;)
anthimata kiyapu eke nam mokakdo ekak thiyenawa:eek::eek:
 

chiraa

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pamithK said:
ayye eeye mama ara liyapuwa nisa thread eka upset wunaada danne nehe..mata passe meter wune..sorry..

pissuda:eek:
ehema mukuth upset ekak na ban..:eek:
Umba naraka deyak kiyala nane..:) SO why sorry?:rofl: