Because of u..............

Dec 13, 2006
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hmm...
That night when i was alone with u
in the dark forest.
how i wished you would hold me,
how i wished you would kiss me,
how i longed to be in your arms.

I was cold and shivering
you noticed it but still kept shouting
shouting for nothing
shouting at me when it was not my fault.

How i loved u,
how i cared,
but did u even think?,
how you broke my heart,
hoe you made me feel,
how alone i was.

You laughed t the way i was crying,
i was so weak
you dint feel
you coudnt feel
you were like stone
so hard.so dead

Now do you realise?
that i am no longer with u
how much i loved u
how much i gave u
your shedding tears..for whom???some1 u never loved.

Remember i gave you everything, you dint love me back, now its you who will have to suffer!

hey.ppl tell me wat u think about ma poem...
 

shaggy

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~With ma ShImMii gal~
azrah ghaffoor said:
That night when i was alone with u
in the dark forest.
how i wished you would hold me,
how i wished you would kiss me,
how i longed to be in your arms.

I was cold and shivering
you noticed it but still kept shouting
shouting for nothing
shouting at me when it was not my fault.

How i loved u,
how i cared,
but did u even think?,
how you broke my heart,
hoe you made me feel,
how alone i was.

You laughed t the way i was crying,
i was so weak
you dint feel
you coudnt feel
you were like stone
so hard.so dead

Now do you realise?
that i am no longer with u
how much i loved u
how much i gave u
your shedding tears..for whom???some1 u never loved.

Remember i gave you everything, you dint love me back, now its you who will have to suffer!

hey.ppl tell me wat u think about ma poem...

gud 1 azz :( :(