
bohooma sthuuthi uhox aiyee kaviya gana dakwapu adahas walata...kaviya dakka welee unath hithata aapu kavi sithuwilla harima agei...uhox said:hmm..
good poetic expresion
kavya themawatama gelapena rupaka (metaphors) bawitha karala thiyenawa....
sankalapanawa athin hondai....
siyapath pipena vil diyamaba
gewasa dhanu athathiwa
soya diya rakus
vidimi hiyak
rakusu dehegena
diyama nisalaya
nelum pipethiya
rakusu nomethiya
obage kaviye "bora diye pipena nelum", gena kiyewu wita me punchi kavi sankalpanawa sitata awa
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ah nango adath ammida kiyawala dunne kaviye theerumaG.R.E.A said:Thanks akki!!! lassanai!!![]()
bdw tx for da commentOnna ithin patan gaththax-pert said:Poem eka nam lassanai nikini as always
(meh yakage ge photobucket eke thiyana eka thamai podi aulakata thiyenne )
Ado Mr. Boma>> Ubata ninda yanne nadda
Ane ubatath wechchi deyak lokka


nikini said:bohooma sthuuthi uhox aiyee kaviya gana dakwapu adahas walata...kaviya dakka welee unath hithata aapu kavi sithuwilla harima agei...![]()
x-pert said:Poem eka nam lassanai nikini as always
(meh yakage ge photobucket eke thiyana eka thamai podi aulakata thiyenne)
Ado Mr. Boma>> Ubata ninda yanne nadda
Ane ubatath wechchi deyak lokka![]()
uhox said:![]()
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sunil wan diyambata pena - Diya rakusu dadayama"
ese nomethiwa,,,kese surakim da - oba nelum mala?
