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Mr.Wedda

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    හොදට English grammer පුලුවන් එකෙක් පහල තියෙන article එක බලලා මේකෙ වැරදි තියෙනවා නම් කියපන්කො.. ලොකු උදව්වක්...

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    ABC company won this award for its export performance and the growth in exports achieved during the preceding three years encompassing various products and services, product and market development, financial management of the enterprise, quality of products and services, impact on the environment, improvements in productivity leading to efficient management of the enterprise, and special certifications including ISO certifications acquired by an enterprise over the years.

    The 26th Annual NCE Export Awards organized by the National Chamber of Exporters of Sri Lanka (NCE) was held on 28th September 2018 in the Main Ballroom of the Shangri-La Hotel, Colombo.. Sri Lanka’s Netherlands Ambassador Joanne Doornewaard was the Chief Guest. Over 50 Sri Lankan exporters of local products including agricultural, rubber, tea, gems, spice and spices based products and services providers such as overseas construction companies were felicitated at the ceremony.

    The NCE which serves Sri Lankan exporters, and known as the 'Voice of the Exporters', has been conducting this event without a break since 1993. It encourages, recognizes and rewards excellence in exporters and service providers to exporters, who make an indispensable and vital contribution to sustain and expand the economy.Award winners have been selected from each of the three major areas - Export of Products, Export of Business and Professional Services, Suppliers and Service Providers to Exporters. The structure and content of the awards scheme and evaluation criteria has been continuously refined over the years with the inclusion of new features, to become the benchmark for similar award schemes in Sri Lanka. Awards in respect of the various product and services sectors was presented in the form of Gold, Silver and Bronze trophies to applicants who reach the minimum standard set by an independent professional panel of judges representing the various disciplines related to exports.
     

    pranathlcp

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    හොදට English grammer පුලුවන් එකෙක් පහල තියෙන article එක බලලා මේකෙ වැරදි තියෙනවා නම් කියපන්කො.. ලොකු උදව්වක්...

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    ABC company won this award for its export performances and its growth in exports achieved during the preceding three years encompassing various products and services, product and market development, financial management of the enterprise, quality of products and services, impact on the environment, improvements in productivity leading to efficient management of the enterprise, and special certifications including ISO certifications acquired by an enterprise over the years.

    The 26th Annual NCE Export Awards ceremony organized by the National Chamber of Exporters of Sri Lanka (NCE), was held on 28th of September 2018 in ("at" හොඳයි වගේ නේද?) the Main Ballroom of the Shangri-La Hotel, Colombo where the Chief Guest was Sri Lanka's Netherlands Ambassador Joanne Doornewaard. Over 50 Sri Lankan exporters of local products including agricultural, rubber, tea, gems, spice and spices based products and services providers such as overseas construction companies were felicitated at the ceremony.

    The NCE which serves Sri Lankan exporters, and known as the 'Voice of the Exporters', has been conducting this event without a break since 1993. It encourages, recognizes and rewards the excellence in exporters and service providers to exporters, who make an indispensable and vital contribution to sustain and expand the economy. (space added)The award winners have been selected from each of the three major areas - Export of Products, Export of Business and Professional Services, Suppliers and Service Providers to Exporters. The structure and content of the awards scheme and evaluation criteria has been continuously refined over the years with the inclusion of new features, to become the benchmark for similar award schemes in Sri Lanka. Awards in respect of the various products and service(removed "s") sectors were presented in the form of Gold, Silver and Bronze trophies to applicants who had reached the minimum standards set by an independent professional panel of judges representing (removed "the") various disciplines related to exports.

    උඩ ටික බලන්න
     

    castellain

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    Machan. There’s a problem. Sentences are too long. That’s a bad practice when it comes to writing. Make it simple. Your 1st paragraph is incomprehensive.
     
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    castellain

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    ABC company won this award for its performance on exports. The company’s growth in exports has been achieved during the preceding three years in various components. More specifically in products and services, product and market development, financial management of the enterprise, the quality of products and services, impact on environment, improvements in productivity leading to efficient management of the enterprise. and special certifications including ISO certifications acquired by an enterprise over the years. ( can’t understand what you’re trying to say here) If I put, “The company has been awarded numerous ISO certifications over the years”. Is that what you wanted to say?
     

    Mr.Wedda

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    ABC company won this award for its performance on exports. The company’s growth in exports has been achieved during the preceding three years in various components. More specifically in products and services, product and market development, financial management of the enterprise, the quality of products and services, impact on environment, improvements in productivity leading to efficient management of the enterprise. and special certifications including ISO certifications acquired by an enterprise over the years. ( can’t understand what you’re trying to say here) If I put, “The company has been awarded numerous ISO certifications over the years”. Is that what you wanted to say?

    Machan I want to said that we have won this award because of our company performance on export,... bla bla bla..special certifications including ISO certifications..etc which were obtained past 3 or 4 years.(Pahugiya kale api lagakaragaththa me dewal nisa api sammanaya dinuwa)
     

    castellain

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    Machan I want to said that we have won this award because of our company performance on export,... bla bla bla..special certifications including ISO certifications..etc which were obtained past 3 or 4 years.(Pahugiya kale api lagakaragaththa me dewal nisa api sammanaya dinuwa)

    How about this then?


    ABC company won this award for its roaring/booming/thriving performance on exports. The company’s growth in exports has been achieved during the preceding three years specifically in following components. Products and services, product and market development, financial management of the enterprise, the quality of products and services, impact on environment, and improvements in productivity leading to efficient management of the enterprise. The company has been awarded numerous ISO certifications over the years due to aforementioned accomplishments.
     
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    Mr.Wedda

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    How about this then?


    ABC company won this award for its roaring/booming/thriving performance on exports. The company’s growth in exports has been achieved during the preceding three years specifically in following components. Products and services, product and market development, financial management of the enterprise, the quality of products and services, impact on environment, and improvements in productivity leading to efficient management of the enterprise. The company has been awarded numerous ISO certifications over the years due to aforementioned accomplishments.

    Eka hodai wage machan. thanks
     

    baadshah

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    The NCE which serves Sri Lankan exporters, and known as the 'Voice of the Exporters', has been conducting this event without a break since 1993

    This should be:

    The NCE which serves the exporters in Sri Lanka, and also known as the 'Voice of the Exporters', has been consecutively conducting this event since 1993.