Even After my Last breath.. || My 2nd Poem ||

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

Well Done malliyaa...! IT is a NICE , CUTE poem..!

Keep it up!
both ur love and poems...!

All the best!

Ahhhhhh Tnxxxxx Akkkkkkiiiiiiii,,,,

Tnx 4 ur encouraging words....

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

DUDE... just now Mrs. Nash showed me the thread.

Whoaaa... ola man.. you seems to be flying, breathing, eating and sleeping love these days.

Congrats and nice poem bro

Ahhhh hehehehe... yeaaah flyin breathing eatin nd sleepin nd Mmm ETC ETC love hehehehe... ahhh bt not much eatin cz fastin period startd na hehehe...

maan i loooove her hehehehe.... tnxxx bro...... tnx a lot 4 ur blush makin words hehehe...

 

[accessuser]

ubatanam loku prasnayak thiyaanawa wage neda ??????//

 

[Danurp]

wOw
It's really nice..........

 

[sherlock]

maxxa teen

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

ubatanam loku prasnayak thiyaanawa wage neda ??????//

Ahhh Y machnzzzzz?????????????????????????

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

maxxa teen

Tnxx bro!!

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

wOw
It's really nice..........

Tnnxx Sis!!

 

[Elysium]

first of all sry 4 draging dis thread up mallayo cuz I just saw it

hmm wt can I tell abt this poem hmmm no words 2 discribe ur lines & fellings
really awesome I love ur rhyming mallayo those r making this poem more & more lovely
thx 4 sharing

 

[G2H]

Wow Malliya.. it's really , really great..
Yes..." LOVE DO MAKE CHANGES..."

 

[anarkalee]

wow love eka nisa kolla diyunuwela
keep it up dear
nice poem

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

first of all sry 4 draging dis thread up mallayo cuz I just saw it

hmm wt can I tell abt this poem hmmm no words 2 discribe ur lines & fellings
really awesome I love ur rhyming mallayo those r making this poem more & more lovely
thx 4 sharing

Ahhhhh Dunnno hw to tnx 4 ur encouraging words... TNX A LOT AKKKIII

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

Wow Malliya.. it's really , really great..
Yes..." LOVE DO MAKE CHANGES..."

TNX A LOT AKKI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yepz Love Changed me a LOT Nd Im Lovin it

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

wow love eka nisa kolla diyunuwela
keep it up dear
nice poem

Ahh tnxxx Mrs.Doctor.... hehhee

poddak dawas yanakota oyath diyunu wei.. love karanawaney !!

 

[sihini]

good work malli

keep writing!

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

good work malli

keep writing!

Tnxx Akkki

 

[fernandokasu]

hey!! malli its really nice......
tawa liyamu.....

 

[G2H]

TNX A LOT AKKI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yepz Love Changed me a LOT Nd Im Lovin it

he..he.. Ya.. ya.. So Congratulations malliya

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

hey!! malli its really nice......
tawa liyamu.....

Ahhh Tnxxxx Akkkkii!!!

Thawa liyanna!! Mmm hehe... yepzz!!

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

he..he.. Ya.. ya.. So Congratulations malliya

Ahhh Tnx Again Akkkiiiiii!!!