I'll go

[ama_li]

Yes
I know
it's hard
for
both of us...
your wanting,
needing,
hoping,
waiting,
almost
seeming
to be baiting
as you
reach out
in a way
that fills
me
with fear...
yes
you know
I'll go
and you'll
cry
for a while...
then
you'll grow
It's all right,
my friend,
smile,
You can't
get me
lost
in a life
that
I
dread..

 

[Kasunm]

hmmm

 

[coolgindara]

`

 

[fazaal24]

ehemm

 

[ama_li]

Tl smthn abt dis wil u..

 

[shaggy]

Tl smthn abt dis wil u..

cannot be accepted

 

[ama_li]

How come?

 

[shaggy]

How come?

as per the law of love

 

[pink_lime1]

interesting... i didnt rilli read the whole thing.. too lazy

 

[shaggy]

interesting... i didnt rilli read the whole thing.. too lazy

u said interesting with out reading the whole thing??????

 

[Kasunm]

no comments hehe

 

[chanaka_1987]

Luks like ur Deppressed....And hey why would he(Judging dat ur a gal) Cry if u go? and grow after a while?

 

[ama_li]

Luks like ur Deppressed....And hey why would he(Judging dat ur a gal) Cry if u go? and grow after a while?

he'll cry because it will hurt him.. and then he'll grow to accept it.........

 

[Kasunm]

teens

 

[chanaka_1987]

he'll cry because it will hurt him.. and then he'll grow to accept it.........

that makes sense.....so i'll give it an 8 out of 10.....(I'm not a poet my self, but u dn't usually give 10's o 9's nae)

 

[ama_li]

that makes sense.....so i'll give it an 8 out of 10.....(I'm not a poet my self, but u dn't usually give 10's o 9's nae)

thank you buddy........