Kiyan wihangune aida kiyaa

[nikini]

 

[anarkalee]

wow nikini akka
ela poem eka
thankzzzzzzzz

 

[Boman]

Wow..Harima lassanai...

 

[kavithaheshani]

wow akki ekat godaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaak lassanai

 

[T.Kanch]

Sundara kavak..... adare gana mona tharam nam kavi liyanna puluwanda....lassanai nikini...

 

[nirusha]

Shoooook Harima LaSSanai Neganiyeeee........

 

[dewasmitha]

harima lassanai akkiyo kaviya

 

[northtech]

Soduru Wadan Mihiri Hagum
Nathath Pera lese....
Pathumak Atha
Sithe Konaka
Oba Ganama Ane...
Nethumanen Boho Athayi
Api Dedena Ane....
Kedinaka Ho Hamu Unothin
Saththama Saththayi
Nohagawama Pawasannam
Pathuma Mage Sithe....​

Lassana Kaviyak Nikini !!!

 

[OscarNonis]

I have some comments,

Contact me when u and me online.

Read your poem again and again and find out mistakes.

You have done a good job and u must listen to comments and suggestions both to improve your talents.

Good Luck !

 

[Boman]

I have some comments,

Contact me when u and me online.

Read your poem again and again and find out mistakes.

You have done a good job and u must listen to comments and suggestions both to improve your talents.

Good Luck !

Machan..

you can post all your comments here including her mistakes

I dont think nikini will get angry seeing them

Im sure she'll be very happy to correct her mistakes and improve her skills

 

[blackroses]

Machan..

you can post all your comments here including her mistakes

I dont think nikini will get angry seeing them

Im sure she'll be very happy to correct her mistakes and improve her skills

yeahhh......... correct bomaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

 

[nikini]

what boman said was true..I always appriciate the comments and suggetions of the viewers who reads my poems and also if there are any mistakes i am really happy to know ur comments about them too..So please feel free to post all ur comments including mistakes of the poem in the thread coz it is the easiest way for me..thanks u

 

[msanjeewa]

oyage kaviya harima lassanai

oka liuwe matada

 

[shalinda]

shaaa lasenai akki

 

[nikini]

oyage kaviya harima lassanai

oka liuwe matada

naha...ooka liuwe gahakola walata,irata,mal walata wageema kurullanta...

 

[nikini]

shaaa lasenai akki

 

[uhox]

honda nirmanayak..

ewagema , me kaviyata adala oscar soyura ge comments api balaporotthu wenawa..

kaviyak comment kireema honda deyak..Eya nikini nangitath thama hekiyawa thawa thawath pulul karaganna maga padavi..

suba pethum

 

[nikini]

Soduru Wadan Mihiri Hagum
Nathath Pera lese....
Pathumak Atha
Sithe Konaka
Oba Ganama Ane...
Nethumanen Boho Athayi
Api Dedena Ane....
Kedinaka Ho Hamu Unothin
Saththama Saththayi
Nohagawama Pawasannam
Pathuma Mage Sithe....​

Lassana Kaviyak Nikini !!!

bolwa giyapu wadan langama
hitha ridena bawath
pathapu pathum hithee thawama
milina naha thawath
nethu maaneta oba man ada
bohoo dura namuth
magee hithin pathapu obama
dura giyapu hadak​

 

[nikini]

honda nirmanayak..

ewagema , me kaviyata adala oscar soyura ge comments api balaporotthu wenawa..

kaviyak comment kireema honda deyak..Eya nikini nangitath thama hekiyawa thawa thawath pulul karaganna maga padavi..

suba pethum

sthuthi aiya... adahas udahas nathuwa kavi liyana apee gamana asaarthakai eeka man piligannawa...

 

[akila101]

nice poem akki