..*..KNOWING WAS NOT ENOUGH..*..

[sampath312]

*my very best English poem...if you finds it not too good..pls neglect

 

[TΞΞNSTAR™]

reallly nyc machnz... really touchin... really lyk it machn.. wish i can rite poems too

podi podi grammer mistake thiyenewa machnz.. but really maxa

 

[rav3idu]

nice one bro.. but last four lines... ok never mind.

 

[sriflipflop]

dan ithin harine

 

[maleemsg]

yes its a good one..!
common topic..!

 

[sihini]

nice one........ u hav use da poetic licence..............much.

 

[sampath312]

reallly nyc machnz... really touchin... really lyk it machn.. wish i can rite poems too

he he he u got it man

 

[sampath312]

nice one........ u hav use da poetic licence..............much.

thanks sihini...mm what about liceence no idea about that

 

[sampath312]

nice one bro.. but last four lines... ok never mind.

mona korannda storiya ne ban kiwe..ganan ganda epa athal eka deela kawa wage nam

 

[sampath312]

yes its a good one..!
common topic..!

yes maliyo just wanted to give some try...its not our language so dont feel much..just tried to feel

 

[rav3idu]

mona korannda storiya ne ban kiwe..ganan ganda epa athal eka deela kawa wage nam

he he aulak nee machchooo.. elata liyala thiyanawa..
keep writing kollaa..

 

[CoolCartoon]

good one bro

 

[Samanali]

lyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy