LETS WRITE A LOVE STORY LINE BY LINE

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He woke up..painfully...

"What a bloody mother shagging strange country I live in"... he thought !

One minute there he was saving a chick and a baby chick and the next minute he's thrown stones at and ended up in the ICU ...

He turned his head around... wires, tubes, monitors going "beep... beep" ..

"WTF.. he though ! " .. this is the time call in the "Punisher"

(little that the world knew he was the side kick and the gunsmith of the PUNISHER ! )

oh yeah... the villages are in for some deep sh_t .. bu ha ha ha !!!


(this is turning into an LOVE / Action / Thriller now)
kirimanika the nurse was already exhausted working two shifts at a stretch as her friend sudumanika was in sick leave.

while walking towards the ICU she thought "cant cook today,hav to buy something from the handiye saiwar kade", as roshan was the last patient in the ICU she had checkup before finishing off her long day....

she couldnt fully open the door..her tired brain couldnt gather what she saw to react fast...

(turning point..?)
 

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    freon said:
    kirimanika the nurse was already exhausted working two shifts at a stretch as her friend sudumanika was in sick leave.

    while walking towards the ICU she thought "cant cook today,hav to buy something from the handiye saiwar kade", as roshan was the last patient in the ICU she had checkup before finishing off her long day....

    she couldnt fully open the door..her tired brain couldnt gather what she saw to react fast...

    (turning point..?)

    She saw Roshan waking up ! ... and suddenly a small miniature claw which looks as if made of steel speared through his heart !

    Blood and gore.. all around..............she saw Roshan screaming from the top of his lungs as the creature made it's way through his body.. little by little !

    She witness the birth of THE ALIEN !!

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    Nash_Node said:
    She saw Roshan waking up ! ... and suddenly a small miniature claw which looks as if made of steel speared through his heart !

    Blood and gore.. all around..............she saw Roshan screaming from the top of his lungs as the creature made it's way through his body.. little by little !

    She witness the birth of THE ALIEN !

    the black box with the monitor that looked like the first apple machintosh computer was reading strange charractors with beep signal that sounded remotely like a human heart beat patter.

    roshans body was almost unidentifiable as a human body, his hand was hanging on the side of the blood wetted bed..the creatures eyes were fully black gleamed like a polished "gil bola" :P.... and jaws had come out of the face a bit so that it can opened more widely like a anacondas jaws..it shrugged off the wires attached to the body, and the sailine bottle shatterd on the floor..

    kirimakina's scream was heard across the ward, but for the other workers it was normal that newly admitted patients screamin with pain after they wake up from from the 1st painkiller dose...

    P.S poor roshan should've just crossed the road and gone home :P