My 1st poem....

[tharuksha123]

NICE ONE KOLLA KEEP UP..................

aye liyaida danne na ban..

 

[tharuksha123]

ela ela mara lassanai

hehe..
tnxzz//

 

[Tharshi]

good 1 mallo

 

[tharuksha123]

good 1 mallo

tnx akkiyaa..

 

[N@rUT0]

Matchan ELA

 

[yohari]

Godak lassanai.heart touching.keep it up brother!

 

[CoolCartoon]

lassnay....digatama liyanna

 

[eranga_m]

appata siri ! matath hithenawa dan poem ekak liyala daanna !

 

[pamithK]

not bad habai spelling mistakes and grammar upset thiyenawa..

and i dont find the connection between your 3,4,5 linesw and the reast of the poem..

anyway keep writing..dont give up

 

[tharuksha123]

not bad habai spelling mistakes and grammar upset thiyenawa..

and i dont find the connection between your 3,4,5 linesw and the reast of the poem..

anyway keep writing..dont give up

tnxx..

 

[tharuksha123]

Matchan ELA

tnxx kiwwa.

 

[tharuksha123]

Godak lassanai.heart touching.keep it up brother!

tnx sis...

 

[tharuksha123]

lassnay....digatama liyanna

tnxx k...

 

[tharuksha123]

appata siri ! matath hithenawa dan poem ekak liyala daanna !

ow..hehe..

 

[gtkisaru]

Ela ela...Nice one..!!!

 

[Madu_90]

wow malliya...really nice one...

 

[merandi]

wow ela kiri

 

[gangs_7]

nice

 

[emimaxy]

wow elakiriss malliyaaaaaa
keep it up
ela kollekne meya

 

[rash87]

ade kolla elane
nikamata kiyala sureda livve?
Nice macho, keep 'em coming!