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Nisadas saha Kaavya
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<blockquote data-quote="ishanthidi" data-source="post: 3863019" data-attributes="member: 104984"><p>hmm...u told u need a criticism...he he...so i will begin like this....As a whole i can analyze this poem as a great literacy work of modern time....i think ur rhyming scheme suits the poem in a wonderful manner.....many rhyming couplets are seen which give an excellent sound imagery.....the words sometimes, somehow etc has the repetition of sibilant sounds.....as well as i can clearly see the visual imagery in this poem......So together with all these techniques this poem can be knows as an excellent work.....so good luck dear</p><p></p><p></p><p>BHO HA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA</p><p></p><p>PS: I KNOW U WILL NEVER ASK ME TO COMMENT ON UR WORKS ANYMORE</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="ishanthidi, post: 3863019, member: 104984"] hmm...u told u need a criticism...he he...so i will begin like this....As a whole i can analyze this poem as a great literacy work of modern time....i think ur rhyming scheme suits the poem in a wonderful manner.....many rhyming couplets are seen which give an excellent sound imagery.....the words sometimes, somehow etc has the repetition of sibilant sounds.....as well as i can clearly see the visual imagery in this poem......So together with all these techniques this poem can be knows as an excellent work.....so good luck dear BHO HA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA PS: I KNOW U WILL NEVER ASK ME TO COMMENT ON UR WORKS ANYMORE [/QUOTE]
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