My first nisadasa-Duras bawa

[Boman]

Sagara werala matha
De ath patala sitina wita
Popiyana dethol matha oba
Sinahawak andena wita
Neth helami iwathata obagen
Ma sitha oba laga randa

Esanin,

Wenus wei kalaye hadaya
Hiru gilee..Tharu nagee
Raya prasaranaya wei
Rala bindee werala matha
Nagai ralu sinaha hada
Neth helami yali oba desa
Oba ethana natha

Sulan rallaka ethee
Oba athata adee gosini
Ma ethanama randawa
Kalaya thawath dura gos atha
Oba dan tharuwaka wes gena
Ma Weli katayaki werale
Apa athara duras bawa
Thawath widaganu nohaki kala
Neth helami iwathata obagen
Ma sitha oba laga randa

 

[kepu]

Ela machan keep it up

 

[Boman]

Thanks for the reply machan!!

 

[icreations]

Coool Dude Keep It Up machooo

 

[DANEWMEN]

nice one bro...keep it up....!!!

 

[nikini]

Sagara werala matha
De ath patala sitina wita
Popiyana dethol matha oba
Sinahawak andena wita
Neth helami iwathata obagen
Ma sitha oba laga randa

Esanin,

Wenus wei kalaye hadaya
Hiru gilee..Tharu nagee
Raya prasaranaya wei
Rala bindee werala matha
Nagai ralu sinaha hada
Neth helami yali oba desa
Oba ethana natha

Sulan rallaka ethee
Oba athata adee gosini
Ma ethanama randawa
Kalaya thawath dura gos atha
Oba dan tharuwaka wes gena
Ma Weli katayaki werale
Apa athara duras bawa
Thawath widaganu nohaki kala
Neth helami iwathata obagen
Ma sitha oba laga randa

 

[ishara91]

Elakiri Bro

 

[Boman]

Thanks for your replies Friends!!!!

 

[chiraa]

Ela Boman. Romantic!!! keep it up. nice work.

 

[T.Kanch]

Hmm...nice poem bro..keep it up....

 

[nelum]

Nice poem bro. keep it up