~My FirsT tHreaD~

[too_little]

nice!

thx

 

[Mal Baba]

nice poem dear
keep it up

 

[too_little]

nice poem dear
keep it up

thank you

 

[tharind007]

NIC poem..

 

[too_little]

NIC poem..

thnakx

 

[පූස්]

 

[||~R_girl~||]

I'm not a poet/writer myself but in my opinion nah dont like it. doesnt sound like a poem at all. It's like few phrases written one below the other.
try to make it rhyme and more poetic next time.

 

[||~R_girl~||]

does this look like a poem?

I'm not a poet/writer myself
but in my opinion nah dont like it.
doesnt sound like a poem at all.
It's like few phrases written
one below the other.
try to make it rhyme
and more poetic next time.

 

[hitmanrock]

nice

 

[Lasithxyz]

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