Need some feedback

[hul2000]

Hi guys,
It would be great if you can give a feedback for my EK|Zine article ("History of Computer Storage")
This is my first attempt to write an article for a magazine. so, there may be some errors.
so, give your feedback so I can improve my articles on future issues.

(I'll take both negative and positive comments)

 

[anarkalee]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

 

[tckrockz]

podak inna ban mata hariyata kiyawana bari wunna monwath

 

[dexter.morgan.666]

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wrong number


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[hul2000]

Any feedback?

 

[lahirumam]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

THAT'S NEWS

 

[Kalindugayan]

Tama kiyewwe ne

Ada reta kiyawala heta udeta kiyannam

 

[x-pert]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

What's up ?? If you don't have anything to post then just wait. ((&^%%#%#)

 

[x-pert]

I didn't think it was your first attempt machang. It was good. Keep it up.

 

[hdgpure]

kiyawala balala oyata pm karannammmmmmmm,
i was unable to read that,,,,,,,,,,,,

 

[hul2000]

I didn't think it was your first attempt machang. It was good. Keep it up.

Thanks

 

[hul2000]

Any more feedback?

 

[ratedrkoman]

kiyawala balala kiyannam .....

 

[sri_lion]

Hi bro I read your article, it was very informative and thanks for your effort!

It would be nice if you could separate it to few logical sections though, because then people can get some idea at a glance of what the whole article intend to convey!

So it will also encourage them to read through as well!!

You can carry on this topic and talk about the birth of Optical Drives, Thumb Drives, standards like USB, how mobile computing effected the storage and devices over the years! Its a big area!

Anyway looking forward to the continuation of your article in the next issue!

 

[hul2000]

Hi bro I read your article, it was very informative and thanks for your effort!

It would be nice if you could separate it to few logical sections though, because then people can get some idea at a glance of what the whole article intend to convey!

So it will also encourage them to read through as well!!

You can carry on this topic and talk about the birth of Optical Drives, Thumb Drives, standards like USB, how mobile computing effected the storage and devices over the years! Its a big area!

Anyway looking forward to the continuation of your article in the next issue!

Thanks for the feedback machang.
What type of logical sections should I separate?
I was going to going to go from the oldest types of memory to the newest.
Delay line->CRT->Ferrite Core memory->Bubble memory etc.

My original plan was to stop at the Hard Disk (the article is on early history). But I'll think of continuing it.

Thanks again.

 

[ran123456]

balamu !!!!!!!!!!

 

[sri_lion]

Thanks for the feedback machang.
What type of logical sections should I separate?
I was going to going to go from the oldest types of memory to the newest.
Delay line->CRT->Ferrite Core memory->Bubble memory etc.

My original plan was to stop at the Hard Disk (the article is on early history). But I'll think of continuing it.

Thanks again.

That's up to you bro! Sometimes if there's no real format, you'll have to create your own!

You can use some of those technical terms, but in between use some normal words as well..

For example like "Birth of Giga era", "Storage on the fly" hope you get it!

Dont stop @ HDD you can talk about storage in general and continue your series of articles!!

GOOD LUCK!! If I find any relevant material I'll send to you!

 

[hul2000]

That's up to you bro! Sometimes if there's no real format, you'll have to create your own!

You can use some of those technical terms, but in between use some normal words as well..

For example like "Birth of Giga era", "Storage on the fly" hope you get it!

Dont stop @ HDD you can talk about storage in general and continue your series of articles!!

GOOD LUCK!! If I find any relevant material I'll send to you!

got the idea
Thanks

 

[sri_lion]

got the idea
Thanks

No probs! Keep up the good work!