Neerasai jeewithe.....

[kadulu]

Nuba samaga eda
Pem rasa winda mawathe.....
Piya nagenawa meda
Samagin susuman wathe...
Suba nakath thawa nathe
Neerasai jeewithe........
Yali arabumak nathe
sitha nathara wee athe...
Neerasai jeewithe.....

 

[kadulu]

kiyawala balannako.

 

[aravindalj]

ehema wunama kocchara pauwda
lassana dukak

 

[kadulu]

ehema wunama kocchara pauwda
lassana dukak

eka nennam.....kochchara pawda.mona karannada? thankssssssssssssss

 

[mutantlast]

Nice creation, duk widina eke lassanak nethi unath, duka lassanata kaviyakata harawala thiyenawa.. keep smiling , write more and more..

 

[blackroses]

jeewithe neerasa naa mata..........

coz hemadema positive widiyata hitana nisa........

niyama adahasa.........

 

[kadulu]

Nice creation, duk widina eke lassanak nethi unath, duka lassanata kaviyakata harawala thiyenawa.. keep smiling , write more and more..

thanksssssssssssssssss

 

[kadulu]

jeewithe neerasa naa mata..........

coz hemadema positive widiyata hitana nisa........

niyama adahasa.........

hmmmm.....thanksssssssssssssss

 

[accessuser]

NIYAMAI

 

[snishantha]

Adaraya sundara varadaki..........

 

[Rovin]

rasa karaganna lunu tikaka daapan

 

[Malinga]

jeevithe neerasa lesa ho rasa lesa dakinne ape sitha. ape sithata ohee pavenna nodi eyaava apita avashaya vidiyata palanayakata nathukaraganna hakinum hamadeyak dihaama madahathva balanna puluvan vai. e thulin neerasa deeval thula thiyenna vu rasabavayan da dakiya haki vethai sithee.

sarala ha keti vuuvath apuruvata gothala thiyana vachana malavak. hithakata danena hangeem gonukarala thiyanava. apuru nirmanayak.

 

[samanali1987]

jeewithe neerasa naa mata..........

coz hemadema positive widiyata hitana nisa........

niyama adahasa.........

same here thik positive..but nice poem

 

[asanka10]

nima niii rasdai ne etakota................

 

[G2H]

Jeewitheta arabumak labenakal ina epa sisiyoo Oya jeewitheta Ayeth Aluth arabumak deela balanna.. Jeewithe aluthin liyanna..