Nonimi Pathuman..

[Kismat]

Lassanai

 

[sachii]

eka thamai!... hithata wadila wage!

ketiyenma kuwoth meka tamay mage mulu jivithayame saranshaya..

 

[isira87]

ela ela..

 

[hafeezalantra]

nonimi pathuman

a kavitka harima lassanaie
oya a kavitika hariyata maga vadanava dakala
livva vaga, aka oyaga atdakimaknam. mata kiyanna tiyanna
(adaraya harima vadanavak kiyala ) vitaraie
mama hitanava ,oyata ,tavat lassanata liyanna puluvan atie kiyala
lassanai kiyala vadak naha, tava utsaha kalot
tavat lassanata liyanna ,puluvan vavie
magan suba patum.

 

[sachii]

a kavitka harima lassanaie
oya a kavitika hariyata maga vadanava dakala
livva vaga, aka oyaga atdakimaknam. mata kiyanna tiyanna
(adaraya harima vadanavak kiyala ) vitaraie
mama hitanava ,oyata ,tavat lassanata liyanna puluvan atie kiyala
lassanai kiyala vadak naha, tava utsaha kalot
tavat lassanata liyanna ,puluvan vavie
magan suba patum.

oyata godak sthutiya attama mata goadak sathutiy adaraya gana liyapu palaweni kawiya mata mehema liyauna eka gana. ow adaraya harima wedanwak eunath eka godak sundaray. apita hari kena hamabawunama ea adare sundara kama wedanawata wada goadak wadiy. eka nisa duk wenna epa dear

 

[sachii]

ela ela..

thanks brother

 

[aravindalj]

Nice Creation dear keep it up

 

[G2H]

Sewwe jeewithaya purawata eka adarayaki
Labune Nosithu lesa adara warusawaki...

Godak lassanai sisi Keep it up

 

[sachii]

Nice Creation dear keep it up

Thanks dear

 

[archirasika]

will be a good start sachi.....

 

[BUA]

really nice one...hard to believe you are a novice to this field..really heart touching 1 keep it up..

 

[T.Kanch]

Lassanai nanga... keep it up...

 

[sachii]

Sewwe jeewithaya purawata eka adarayaki
Labune Nosithu lesa adara warusawaki...

Godak lassanai sisi Keep it up

thanks sis ..

 

[sachii]

will be a good start sachi.....

thanks ayya

 

[Zeus]

Adahasa gattin nam sachi akke normal love sick poem ekak
But ur

• writing style
• words

raised up this poem to a good one
Niyamayi sisi
Keep it up akke

 

[sachii]

Lassanai nanga... keep it up...

thanks akki

 

[SIRUS3001]

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[sachii]

thanks dear.....

really nice one...hard to believe you are a novice to this field..really heart touching 1 keep it up..

 

[sachii]

Adahasa gattin nam sachi akke normal love sick poem ekak
But ur

• writing style
• words

raised up this poem to a good one
Niyamayi sisi
Keep it up akke

ye i know ... everybody has this kind of dream. thanks malla for the comment

 

[gihansage]

Shaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa......!