-------nubath natha ahase--------

[sithija]

sadavathi nuba enna ahasata
andura ethi reyame
kadula keta tharu keta lesin
guvana matha hinahe
susum val ekinekata ethila
valakulu adithe
mage thaniyata nubath payan
amavaka u reye.....................

palu ma hitha kothek handuvada
eyata naha danune
kadulu bidi vati rosa kusumata
pethi kada halune
hadin nagena susum reli gena
maha sulaga hamuve
sithe duka mage asa innata
nubath netha ahase......................

degoda hariye andura atharin
ma nubava seuve
etha adena vala kulakin
nuba ganai esuve
oun nuba gana kisith nokiya
etha dura edune
sadavathi nuba hanika payan
ma noivasille.......................

 

[sudarakagamage]

YOu Seems to Be Quite a Good poet .Go On.NIce Ah!

 

[Doly]

Its nice............keep writing

 

[sujane]

Nyc1...Keep it up

 

[kadulu]

very nice