OBA SABAA BAUDDAYEKDA????

[ravicplk]

bohoma arathavath nirmanayak. mata me velavedi Malani Bulathsinhala mahathmiya gayana karana "dakina vita pansalak" kiyana geethaya sihiyata nagenava. mona daramaya adahuvath, kiyevvath, asuvath vadak nae e matha pihitanne naththum. pansalata giya pamanin bavudayek ho honda pudgalayek venne nae. e vagema gatha danagath pamanin ho bana asuva pamanin silvathek venneth nae. thama sithata e deeval pilibanda nisi vataheema athuvunothin pamanai ohugen samavatama sikshavakata pivisenne. me vage apurvath adahasak kavi kara ape sith sathan thulath yamak hithannata karana lada vaayama ithama anagibavaneeyai.

thx malinga ayya

 

[ravicplk]

Api kiuwe mamath umbath athulu pirisa neda ban

Lassanata liyala thiyanawa machan...Niyamai kawiya

thx boman ayya

 

[ravicplk]

superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrb maxxa dats all i can say...
theruma...liyapu style eka...rhyming...adahasa....wachana... HAMADEYAKMA....real nice mate!!

thaxx nashhh

 

[Clerk_Kent]

Niyama kawiya Ravi malli....
Kane paaarakata wada serai

 

[ravicplk]

oya hari Malee. mansha kiyala ape athamun salakanne mas pamanaine. eeth malu, karavala, unbalakada adi kota athi siyaluma pranagatha vakrava ho siduvana eeva mansha ganayata vatenava. para pana nasimen ape badaviyath poshanaya kirima thami api karanne. nodana e varadda karana kenaata vada danagena karana kena ithama pahath kenek. me maath e kiyana ganayatai vatenne.
api kavuruth varadi karanava thamai. habai e varadi puluvan tharum avama karaganna uthsaha karanavanum e kenata tharamak ho thaman gana sahimakata pathvenna puluvan. boruvata lowata penennata yam yam de keruvata eyaage hitha dannava eya karana deeval gana. eeka nisa kaatavath thamange hardashakshiyata boru karanna hakiyavak nae. api kavuruth me deeval gana sithiya uthui. eeeth ehema kivvata avankava ma api e deeval sithanne nae. me dakina velavedi sithuvath thava tikakin amathaka karala dai.

i agree

 

[randula01]

NIYAMANI MACHAN PATTA WORDS TIKKA................

 

[randoli]

Sahatika attaa! Ada godak waradi karanne ape bauddha aya tamay. Godak denek Budurajanan wahanseta pana wage. Eth eyala samajayata ehema neme. Wadiya epa.. office ekak aragena balanna. Hamadaama dawase paya 24 ma pansale inna samahara udaviya tamay wadiyenma kapili daane. Ape minissu dakshayekta wat tanak denawada? A manussayawa kohomahari paagala daanawa. Me rate niyama bauddhayo inne bohoma tika denay. A aya samajayata sewayak karanne nihandawa indala.

 

[akila101]

very thoughtful, interesting and modern poem
keep it up

 

[ravicplk]

reality of all of us

thx for u r comment

 

[nEoN_wHitE]

wowwwww wowwwwwwwwww meka nam godaaaaak hodai.. harima lasanai
mama EK wala read karapu kavi walin udinma thiyana kaviyak
hithatath nican wenasak me wage wenas jathiye kaviyak EK eken kiyeuwama,....
thawa liyanna

 

[ruka max]

maxxa mchn thnks

 

[ravicplk]

wowwwww wowwwwwwwwww meka nam godaaaaak hodai.. harima lasanai
mama EK wala read karapu kavi walin udinma thiyana kaviyak
hithatath nican wenasak me wage wenas jathiye kaviyak EK eken kiyeuwama,....
thawa liyanna

thankssssssssss ilaga eka balanna koo
oyagollo gana thama liyanneeee

 

[shaaj]

KAWIYA NAM MAXXA MACHOOO.... HEBEI MEHEMA DEYAK THIYENAWA...

GIHIYEK WIDIYATA GIHI SEPA YADINAWA KIYALA EKA BUDDAGAMATA PATAHENI NEHENE... "SIGALOWADA SUTTRAYE" HODIN GIHI JEEWITHE JEEWAT WENNA ONA WIDIHA KIYALA THIYENAWA...

ANIT EKA MAMA BUDDAGAME KIYALAT.. MAMA BUDDAGAMA GENA YAM THAAK DURATA DENA GATTAT MATA BEHENE SIYALU BEDEEM AT ERALA NIVANA KARA YANNA... NIRVAANAYA KIYANNE MOKAKDA?? EI API EYATA LANGA WENNA HADANNE?? API KOHOMADA EKA KARANNE?? KIYANA HEMA PRASHNAYAKATAMA UTHTHARA API LANGA THIBUNAT APITA EKA KARANNA AMARUI...

MATA HITHENA WIDIHATA SEBE BAUDDAYEK WENNA NAM MAS KILO GANAN KEWAT ADU GAANE "PANSIL" PADA PAHA AWNKAWA RAKINAWANAM EA ATHI. ITHURU EWA TIKA DAWASK YANAKOTA MINIHATAMA WETAHENAWA...

THAWA DEWAL THIYENAWA PASSE KIYANNAM...

MONAWA UNAT KAVIYANAM ELAKIRI...

 

[vishankapraveen]

 

[shaaj]

 

[uhox]

bohoma arthawath kaviyak...

sampradaika ridmayen saha akruthiyen yuthu nisa kaviya prasthutayatath gelapenawa....honda nirmanayak

 

[amilazzz]

Ela elaq .........G8 work !!!

 

[ravicplk]

Aththa katawa.. nice work machoo..

thxxx

 

[ravicplk]

Ela elaq .........G8 work !!!

thxx

 

[ravicplk]

bohoma arthawath kaviyak...

sampradaika ridmayen saha akruthiyen yuthu nisa kaviya prasthutayatath gelapenawa....honda nirmanayak

thxxx