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methsri

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    Nice one bro :D

    I wrote a similar sinhala poem like thz called "Numba Enathuru" .The difference is i didn't say ur last few lines in my poem.Its really nice you have shown us ur pain through thz lines..keep it up!

    Thank you Sis ... I wrote the last few lines becoz i thought why i keep it inside ??? .... If oneday person who I care for the most see this ... She should know how much I Loved her
     

    methsri

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    Nice poem Bro.
    When others need our hand we must give it...but don't hope always its return...coz when it didn't we dieing in inside...
    Keep it up Bro. :)
    Wish u all the best!

    Yeaahhh That's what I was thinking ... but In this case I really really needed her hand in return :) ....

    Thank you !!!! :) :) :)
     

    methsri

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    Loved your poem, a nice one!
    that's how it is, most of the time. You give and give and give, but when you need it nobody's around you :)

    hmm The thing is we always think nobody will around you when you need them the most ...but we always beleive that somebody will hold you , care you ... The sad thing is When you need someone so badly .. the way they leave us behind :)