Nice one bro
I wrote a similar sinhala poem like thz called "Numba Enathuru" .The difference is i didn't say ur last few lines in my poem.Its really nice you have shown us ur pain through thz lines..keep it up!
Thank you Sis ... I wrote the last few lines becoz i thought why i keep it inside ??? .... If oneday person who I care for the most see this ... She should know how much I Loved her

