Nice one bro
I wrote a similar sinhala poem like thz called "Numba Enathuru" .The difference is i didn't say ur last few lines in my poem.Its really nice you have shown us ur pain through thz lines..keep it up!
Nice poem Bro.
When others need our hand we must give it...but don't hope always its return...coz when it didn't we dieing in inside...
Keep it up Bro.
Wish u all the best!