The Kiss

[twisted]

While my eyes slept quietly
fragile thoughts wept softly
I smiled for nothing
and knew that I loved my enemy..

she stood there beside me
motionless and stared vacantly
parted lips while she whispered
made no sense to me

her cold bare arms held me
though her frozen breath took away my clarity
in her icy grasp I knew,
that I knew peace

as the rays of moon hugged her skin
she let her robe rest beside her feet
for a bittersweet taste of sin
I knew I'd thread my sanity..

with her pale lips she kissed me
in a state of trance id fallen asleep
as life escaped from my heart
I'd kissed my enemy..

 

[P789]

beautiful,keep it up.You truly have a talent for this

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[truth4L]

still the poet huh?

 

[twisted]

beautiful,keep it up.You truly have a talent for this

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thanks

still the poet huh?

wrote this after 2 years man btw what have you been telling to that mutual friend of ours

 

[truth4L]

thanks



wrote this after 2 years man btw what have you been telling to that mutual friend of ours

nuthin.. why wat did he tell you?

 

[~ Fiona ~]

Loved it And as always, had to read it twice
Sooooo glad u started writing again keep it going

 

[Anushanga777]

thnQu
rep+

 

[twisted]

Loved it And as always, had to read it twice
Sooooo glad u started writing again keep it going

thnQu
rep+

Thanks guys

 

[chanakamanjula]

beautiful 11+++

 

[twisted]

beautiful 11+++

thanks

 

[Dinushasankalpa]

oh...! Great

 

[twisted]

oh...! Great

thanks

 

[reply]

there s a poet in you twisted
in the poem i was interested
mate you shot it over the moon
and your name'll be known very soon

this skill, mate one would die to gain
and with money you'll never obtain
the mastery of poetry as seen here
yet fame for you as a poet, that s very near

while many people try and always get stuck
you are born with skill and carry good luck
twisted though you are, hey that s not true
hope to see many more poems written by you

 

[twisted]

there s a poet in you twisted
in the poem i was interested
mate you shot it over the moon
and your name'll be known very soon

this skill, mate one would die to gain
and with money you'll never obtain
the mastery of poetry as seen here
yet fame for you as a poet, that s very near

while many people try and always get stuck
you are born with skill and carry good luck
twisted though you are, hey that s not true
hope to see many more poems written by you

this is very flattering and amazing, thanks a lot mate.
and you seem to be quite capable of writing too, I'd like to see things you wrote if you don't mind, Pls share.
thanks again

 

[reply]

this is very flattering and amazing, thanks a lot mate.
and you seem to be quite capable of writing too, I'd like to see things you wrote if you don't mind, Pls share.
thanks again

well i m not cut out to be a poet
but happy to hear that some one likes to read them.
shall share

 

[twisted]

well i m not cut out to be a poet
but happy to hear that some one likes to read them.
shall share

I shall look forward to reading them

 

[kolavari]

beautiful bro TFS...it's really nice...

 

[twisted]

beautiful bro TFS...it's really nice...

thanks bro..can't remember if it was about suicide or drugs or drinking that I wrote this poem

 

[kolavari]

thanks bro..can't remember if it was about suicide or drugs or drinking that I wrote this poem

Obviously...you don't remember anything when you are high

 

[shameera89]

nice...