Winner being loser

[Doly]

Oh Thank God, you my friend stood against the storm
Which I was facing, felt myself glad and curious,

Felt happy to see you laughing at me,
as I was struggling, Hope you enjoyed the fun..

Thank you so much for opening the blindfold,
And knowing me the hidden truth and fake in you..

Tell me that, I m the reason for the facts
I want to curse for that cause..

Im not the gem, you think of it
Wish to remain the stone, to handle the all seasons..

This is the friend who consider sacrifice
And you thought of sacrificing the friend in me..

Thank you for letting the hand off, feeling now Courageous,
and would be able to handle any kind of storms..

You have shown the path to live dear..
All I seek is your happiness, that’s why I let you leave my hand..

I want all the matters to get closed and over
And pray to the god, to make me winner being loser...





Minu

 

[ratedrkoman]

nice......

 

[dxxcxxxx]

Nice....

Thx. 4 sharing....

 

[koondeGoda]

Nice .

 

[Zeus]

Felt happy to see you laughing at me,
as I was struggling, Hope you enjoyed the fun..

Whts wrng if u replace laghung wi smile
Cz laugh can made for teasing also ne

Thank you so much for opening the blindfold,
And knowing me the hidden truth and fake in you..

......

Minu

for the first tym Minu
I xtremly apriciate and praise ur poem by whole heart
First i read ur poem carelessly cz love is not my subject
But afterwards ur writing style ,words made my (if i hav )heart forece to read it agin
Ur ideas (i dnt knw u verywell ne so ) LOOKS like pure and from ur own heart
Now i hav doubt about the decision made by ur one (u knw wht i mean)

Xtremly superb sisi
Minu u knw, Even im a cold heart for this kinda poems ur poem is really heart touchable
Keep it up ur good wrk sis
(Most of the tym) Im wi u
Budu saranayi

 

[Doly]

nice......

Thanks

 

[ozone_buzzer]

Good... Keep it up...

 

[Mackenzie]

Keep onn writting

 

[Doly]

Nice....

Thx. 4 sharing....

Thanks dear

 

[Doly]

Nice .

Thanks dear

 

[Doly]

Whts wrng if u replace laghung wi smile
Cz laugh can made for teasing also ne



for the first tym Minu
I xtremly apriciate and praise ur poem by whole heart
First i read ur poem carelessly cz love is not my subject
But afterwards ur writing style ,words made my (if i hav )heart forece to read it agin
Ur ideas (i dnt knw u verywell ne so ) LOOKS like pure and from ur own heart
Now i hav doubt about the decision made by ur one (u knw wht i mean)

Xtremly superb sisi
Minu u knw, Even im a cold heart for this kinda poems ur poem is really heart touchable
Keep it up ur good wrk sis
(Most of the tym) Im wi u
Budu saranayi

Thanks chitath ...............can explain my words too...but this is not the correct time

 

[Pentagram]

nice 1 akki!

 

[Doly]

Good... Keep it up...

thanks

 

[Doly]

Keep onn writting

i will....thanks dear

 

[Doly]

nice 1 akki!

thanks brother

 

[ishanroz]

niceeee......
Tell me that, I m the reason for the facts
I want to curse for that cause.. ouchhhhh

 

[Doly]

niceeee......
Tell me that, I m the reason for the facts
I want to curse for that cause.. ouchhhhh

not at all


thanks for ur comment ishan