Collection of english poems-EK- (my creations)

[kasp]

man dan hadissi gamanak yanna one.twisted akke man nathi weleta comment karannepa.mata reply karanan wen na.man kiyanan poet kenek kiyanne kawiyak nisadasak kiyanne mokakda kiyala awith.ramuwakata kotuwenna on na kenek.ketiyen hari digata hari kiyana widihak tiyenava.col gihin eddi 6 witara wey.see u sis man oyata mage poems book 1y akata news papers wala giya wicharay danann balanna.take care.kawadawath kenekge adahas liyana thana aka kawiyak nemey kiyanna epa.man godak a paththen study karapu kenek.jeewithe loku wenasak tioyenava kawiyekge.math dakala tiyenava methana wachana tikak witarak sm tymes.mata hithata hari nathi unata aka honda aya innava.so man kiyawanna yan na.mokada kawiya kiyana de nidahase liyanna puluwan deyak.man rata examples ekka pennan.

 

[kasp]

quite ironic there isn't it..you don't wanna judge others but you judge my while saying that, saying that im not a poet prove it

parading your teacher's name is not going to help, give us something real to read, if you don't want negative comments criticising your weakside, just keep them to yourself

he he.meke mage poems wala kathay kiwwa than ona taran tiyenava man thanks kiyala a waradda anduragannava.man aka elanga deydi hadagannava.hmm oya kiyanne methana ekakwath na kiyalada??api rata hambemu.man oyata ay dannavada poet kenek nemey kiwwe.oyage poems through gihin nemey.
.oyata poet kenek kiyana denann gawilawath na.anna akay ehema comment kare.rata kiyanan.tata

 

[kasp]

http://www.elakiri.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1152886

etakan oyata poems nowena mewa kiyo kiyo innako

 

[twisted]

man dan hadissi gamanak yanna one.twisted akke man nathi weleta comment karannepa.mata reply karanan wen na.man kiyanan poet kenek kiyanne kawiyak nisadasak kiyanne mokakda kiyala awith.ramuwakata kotuwenna on na kenek.ketiyen hari digata hari kiyana widihak tiyenava.col gihin eddi 6 witara wey.see u sis man oyata mage poems book 1y akata news papers wala giya wicharay danann balanna.take care.kawadawath kenekge adahas liyana thana aka kawiyak nemey kiyanna epa.man godak a paththen study karapu kenek.jeewithe loku wenasak tioyenava kawiyekge.math dakala tiyenava methana wachana tikak witarak sm tymes.mata hithata hari nathi unata aka honda aya innava.so man kiyawanna yan na.mokada kawiya kiyana de nidahase liyanna puluwan deyak.man rata examples ekka pennan.

by your rationale, anybody can write an essay like you and call it a poem and call him/herself a poet isn't that right?

I have no issues with you writing down your thoughts here, but calling them poems is a bit too far fetched. I wonder what sort of a teacher that sir of yours is, cos if he approved of these as quality poems, that gives us an idea about him..

and sorry to break this down to you, poems should have some discipline, within long retained boundaries, you can go anywhere. but there still are somethings that you can't over-look.

I'm not a girl btw, Tc.

 

[twisted]

he he.meke mage poems wala kathay kiwwa than ona taran tiyenava man thanks kiyala a waradda anduragannava.man aka elanga deydi hadagannava.hmm oya kiyanne methana ekakwath na kiyalada??api rata hambemu.man oyata ay dannavada poet kenek nemey kiwwe.oyage poems through gihin nemey.
.oyata poet kenek kiyana denann gawilawath na.anna akay ehema comment kare.rata kiyanan.tata

any jerk can be a poet, if he's skilled, just cos you are a good, sensitive person, doesn't qualify you to call yourself a poet

and no, there are some good poems in your collection, but still they need improvement and working on, cos even the poems where you kept a flow, tends to repeat same thing in everyline. and the lines look a bit retarted. may be it's just me.

take no offense.

http://www.elakiri.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1152886

etakan oyata poems nowena mewa kiyo kiyo innako

will give comments to it in the appropriate thread.

 

[kasp]

by your rationale, anybody can write an essay like you and call it a poem and call him/herself a poet isn't that right?

I have no issues with you writing down your thoughts here, but calling them poems is a bit too far fetched. I wonder what sort of a teacher that sir of yours is, cos if he approved of these as quality poems, that gives us an idea about him..

and sorry to break this down to you, poems should have some discipline, within long retained boundaries, you can go anywhere. but there still are somethings that you can't over-look.

I'm not a girl btw, Tc.

just came.r u a good poet??

 

[kasp]

hadawathak anduraganna bari kena kawadawath poet kenek wen na

 

[dilrasan]

keep it up sis...nice poems....

 

[kasp]

keep it up sis...nice poems....

thanks aiya

 

[ravinatha]

hadawathak anduraganna bari kena kawadawath poet kenek wen na

hadawatha nemi jeewithya anduraganna...

 

[kasp]

hadawatha nemi jeewithya anduraganna...

jeewithe kiyana de duka sathuta athi wenne kan dekenda

 

[ravinatha]

jeewithe kiyana de duka sathuta athi wenne kan dekenda

ehemanam hadawatha kiyanne indriyak withrai.
duka sathuta denenne manasata..
dats nt wat i meant

 

[kingdewi]

ඔන්න බම්ප් එකක්!

 

[kasp]

ehemanam hadawatha kiyanne indriyak withrai.
duka sathuta denenne manasata..
dats nt wat i meant

kalawedi hadawatha science walin gan na. oka organ ekka kiyala nemey kawi liyanne.a paththa pennalath liyanna puluwan.a unata hadawatha kiyana de duka sathuta adare yraya athi wena thana kiyala ganne.manasa kiyala nisadasaka wage satahan karata api song 1kata wage a words use karan na

 

[kasp]

ඔන්න බම්ප් එකක්!

man liyanna bari keneknemokatada bump

 

[ravinatha]

kalawedi hadawatha science walin gan na. oka organ ekka kiyala nemey kawi liyanne.a paththa pennalath liyanna puluwan.a unata hadawatha kiyana de duka sathuta adare yraya athi wena thana kiyala ganne.manasa kiyala nisadasaka wage satahan karata api song 1kata wage a words use karan na

ganna noganna ewa nemei. kalawa kiyala karanne jeewithyama prathi nirmanaya kirimak. ethakota yam kenek karana niramanyen nirmanakaruwa jeewithya therum aran ethi capacity eka therenawa. ewagema nirmanaya therum ganna akaraya thula 'rasikayage' therum geneeme capacity eka penawa. usas kala kruthiyak hemawitama 'apurwathwayen' yukthai. pera nowu viruuu e kiyanne unique gathiyakin yukthai. hebei unique wenneth eka eka widihata. wediya kala kruthi parisheelanaya karala nethi kenekuta godak dewal unique wage thamai.

niranama thulin nirmana karuwa ge jeewana dekma penawa. oya gena wunath ekthara thalayaka wigraha karanna puluwan. eththatama kiyanawa nam RAMBARI sinduwa Wunath ekthara upa sanskruthiyaka prakashanayak widiyata wigraha karanna puluwan.

obatath onema deyak prakashanaye aithiya thiyenawa. mama ekata garu karanawa. eth rasawindeeme aithiya thiyenne eya kiyawana kenata.

thawa podi deyak i read sum f ur sinhala poems(?). einuth samahara thenaka suhumbul kawiyaka( api kawi yei salakana akaraye) anshu mathrayak thewaree thibenawa. patta gesuu upama roopaka bhawithayen midenna.

 

[kasp]

man liyaddi man liyanne mokak ganada kiyana eka kiyawana kenata therun ganan puluwanann etana sarthakathwaya tiyenava.mage hithta hithena de anith kenatath hithena thana kawiyak sarthakay.ath saralawa liyana aya innava.nathi aya innava.ramuwakata kotu nowena aya innava.

hamotama meke mul wachana tika diha baluwama hithaganna ba.habay man sarala wachanen awasan nokaranan meka therun nogenema inna aya indee.

oke supurudu upama athi. ath hadawathata danenna liya una.mokada aka liwwe magema amma gana.

upamawe kale neme wadagath wenne.aka bawitha karana widiha.yal pana giya upama thawama lassana awa thiyenava.habay oya rasa windina ahen neme anith kena rasa windinne.kenek a widihata kamathi wenna puluwan.oya akamathi de mata lassanay.man akamathi de oyata lassanay.kawiyak liyanan kalin anna a tika therun ganan one.

me mage nirmana keepayak witaray.man dannava liyana hamadema hariyata liya wen na.a wagema liyala sarthaka unu dewal tiyenava.mata awata me samaje piligath gath kathuwaryngen vivechana labuna.a dewal mata pituwahalak anagathayata.

mama kamathi mage widihata issarahata yanna.aka aluth widihak unoth akath kamak na.

kawiyak nisadasak kiyana eka typical widihata neme man liyanne.habay dunna de man hithata gaththa.upama walin ath wenna one tikak.man asa wachana tikak tiyenava.nitharama danava.rasikayata ona widihata hithanna puluwan.ath man hithan liyaddi kawiyak a adahasa hithata yana thana man sarthakay.

keti ho dik wewa.aka liyanna nidahasa tiyenava.mata ugannapu sir mata kiyapu deyak thama minissu tahredeyak bedagaddi saraka wenna kiyala.kawiyak nisaadasak kiyana eka nawathila kiyawanna akamathi aya inava.aka ramuwakata kotu wela liyanna giyama sm tymes ake rasaya nathi wenava.mata godak praveena aya kiyala dunna a gana.man sathutuy a dewal piliganna.ath ara kenek kiwwa wagenan nemey.liyana kenek tawa kenekta liyanan ba kiyan na kawadawath.me widihata liyanan kiyanneth na.akay man kenekta kawiyek nemey kiwwe.man hithan na eyata hithanna hadawathak wath athi kiyala

 

[twisted]

just came.r u a good poet??

I don't know, it's up to others to decide, I'm just another screwed up soul, looking for some peace of mind.

hadawathak anduraganna bari kena kawadawath poet kenek wen na

I'm not calling myself a poet and poets are not some special people. they are just the same...looking for their happiness or way out, in a specific way.

 

[twisted]

kalawedi hadawatha science walin gan na. oka organ ekka kiyala nemey kawi liyanne.a paththa pennalath liyanna puluwan.a unata hadawatha kiyana de duka sathuta adare yraya athi wena thana kiyala ganne.manasa kiyala nisadasaka wage satahan karata api song 1kata wage a words use karan na

now you are contradicting yourself..you said a poet have the liberty to reach beyond any rule or imagination, then why can't one use 'manasa' if it pleases him, in his poem instead of traditional 'hadawatha'?

what I realized from your posts is that you want the whole world to know that you are a 'POET' and you are different or somebody special, which you are not..you are just same ol' human waste just like anybody else. I hope I'm wrong here.

man liyaddi man liyanne mokak ganada kiyana eka kiyawana kenata therun ganan puluwanann etana sarthakathwaya tiyenava.mage hithta hithena de anith kenatath hithena thana kawiyak sarthakay.ath saralawa liyana aya innava.nathi aya innava.ramuwakata kotu nowena aya innava.

hamotama meke mul wachana tika diha baluwama hithaganna ba.habay man sarala wachanen awasan nokaranan meka therun nogenema inna aya indee.

oke supurudu upama athi. ath hadawathata danenna liya una.mokada aka liwwe magema amma gana.

upamawe kale neme wadagath wenne.aka bawitha karana widiha.yal pana giya upama thawama lassana awa thiyenava.habay oya rasa windina ahen neme anith kena rasa windinne.kenek a widihata kamathi wenna puluwan.oya akamathi de mata lassanay.man akamathi de oyata lassanay.kawiyak liyanan kalin anna a tika therun ganan one.

me mage nirmana keepayak witaray.man dannava liyana hamadema hariyata liya wen na.a wagema liyala sarthaka unu dewal tiyenava.mata awata me samaje piligath gath kathuwaryngen vivechana labuna.a dewal mata pituwahalak anagathayata.

mama kamathi mage widihata issarahata yanna.aka aluth widihak unoth akath kamak na.

kawiyak nisadasak kiyana eka typical widihata neme man liyanne.habay dunna de man hithata gaththa.upama walin ath wenna one tikak.man asa wachana tikak tiyenava.nitharama danava.rasikayata ona widihata hithanna puluwan.ath man hithan liyaddi kawiyak a adahasa hithata yana thana man sarthakay.

keti ho dik wewa.aka liyanna nidahasa tiyenava.mata ugannapu sir mata kiyapu deyak thama minissu tahredeyak bedagaddi saraka wenna kiyala.kawiyak nisaadasak kiyana eka nawathila kiyawanna akamathi aya inava.aka ramuwakata kotu wela liyanna giyama sm tymes ake rasaya nathi wenava.mata godak praveena aya kiyala dunna a gana.man sathutuy a dewal piliganna.ath ara kenek kiwwa wagenan nemey.liyana kenek tawa kenekta liyanan ba kiyan na kawadawath.me widihata liyanan kiyanneth na.akay man kenekta kawiyek nemey kiwwe.man hithan na eyata hithanna hadawathak wath athi kiyala

you lack something a poet should have..a poet should be humble, should accept both sorta comments gladly, but you just try to prove yourself right at which you are failing miserably right now.

however, your sinhala poems are much better than the english ones, they are really 'poetry' as opposed to the crap you write in english. I never implied that you can't write, I was just merely saying that you need to work much harder.. I hope you wont take these comments personally, and keep working on your writing, some of these sinhala poems are really nice. you just need to improve your english writing...that's just my opinion.

 

[ashavithanage]

My dear kasp,

Keep it up.. these are the real poems what we have seen from your threads. Anybody can say anything but we know that you are a very good composer of songs and poems. Don`t be negetive on somebody`s jelosy expressions.