My Life is You

[sudeewa]

මොනාද බොලු අනේ
tooli shok nama
thanks​

show ekedi set wemu enam

 

[twisted]

there's nothing new or original here, but it's simple and seems to gather a resonating effect with every word you've put together. it's a little mysterious to say the least.
but the highly cliched set of words that you use here, that we hear from songs everyday, kinda ruins it for me.

Keep writing, you seem to have a talent for it. and pay attention what you write. cause apparently not much work has been put into this. (not to undermine your work but it's clearly evident). would be nice to see some ideas and words we don't see everyday.

and kudos for writing your own poem. keep going. next one will be better.

 

[sayu11111]

niz poem nanga

 

[too_little]

there's nothing new or original here, but it's simple and seems to gather a resonating effect with every word you've put together. it's a little mysterious to say the least.
but the highly cliched set of words that you use here, that we hear from songs everyday, kinda ruins it for me.

Keep writing, you seem to have a talent for it. and pay attention what you write. cause apparently not much work has been put into this. (not to undermine your work but it's clearly evident). would be nice to see some ideas and words we don't see everyday.

and kudos for writing your own poem. keep going. next one will be better.

thanks for your advice...i appreciate it
and yes i'll try to go further with my words
i'll do my best for the next one ​

 

[too_little]

niz poem nanga

hehehe edit korala meya
mona loveda ane mata lol
anyway thanks​

 

[twisted]

thanks for your advice...i appreciate it
and yes i'll try to go further with my words
i'll do my best for the next one ​

I'll look forward to read that Leave me a link.

in the meantime, you should read all the poetry you can get your hands on, not random poems people post on internetz. but the recognized poems from literature. there's a lot to learn. you'll love them.

 

[nnccbb]

කැනඩාවෙ නේද ඉන්නව කිව්වෙ.ඈ කෙල්ලේ නිදා ගන්නැත්ද?රෑ12.35

 

[too_little]

කැනඩාවෙ නේද ඉන්නව කිව්වෙ.ඈ කෙල්ලේ නිදා ගන්නැත්ද?රෑ12.35

man gena hoyana tharamak

 

[nnccbb]

man gena hoyana tharamak

නෑ ඉතිං location දාල තියෙන්නෙ canada කියලනේ

 

[too_little]

නෑ ඉතිං location දාල තියෙන්නෙ canada කියලනේ

ow ithin hariyatama time eka kiyanna tharam
lol...nidi matha nethooo

 

[nnccbb]

ow ithin hariyatama time eka kiyanna tharam
lol...nidi matha nethooo

මම ඉතිං world time බැලුවා. කොම්පීතරෙ එල්ලිලා ඉන්න වවුලියක්ද මන්දා?

 

[charly123]

 

[too_little]

මම ඉතිං world time බැලුවා. කොම්පීතරෙ එල්ලිලා ඉන්න වවුලියක්ද මන්දා?

mona 'කොම්පීතරෙ' yakda lol
ninda yanne nethnam wena mona karannada affa

 

[nnccbb]

mona 'කොම්පීතරෙ' yakda lol
ninda yanne nethnam wena mona karannada affa

නින්ද යන්නැත්තං වවුලියක් තමා.ඉගෙන ගන්නවනේ තාම

 

[Johnnie_Walker]

love you too sudu baba....

 

[king_pandukabaya]

nice one

 

[nnccbb]

හෆ්ෆා මේ කෙල්ල තාම නිදි නැත්ද?
2.11

 

[too_little]

හෆ්ෆා මේ කෙල්ල තාම නිදි නැත්ද?
2.11

nethooo
nida ganna gihin apahu awaaaa

 

[nnccbb]

ඔන්න 1000 post එක ඔයාගෙ thread එකට

වෙලාව 3.40

 

[Thilantdm]

woww nice machn keep it up
rep++