Morethan a poem,diz like a story,over use of free style, if u try to keep bit poetic here .Dz creation becomes gud. Ny way gud apporoach to disclose reality in ourlife:).Try to be more impressive of using figurative language. keep it up:yes:
Is your birthday day 13 of the month?
Your Life
You are sincere and easy going. Flattering and charming around are not your style. You care so much for freedom that often leads you to the difficult path. Because of your sincerity, most people find you easy to be around although you are sometimes...