Finally u created a poem on a new field...
so many lives wasting everyday bcoz of this habits
hope they will see this
U gave an awesome message to the society using u'r creativity
Congratz nanga... Keep on the track
the first two lines takes away the credibility from this poem nangi ..and its really cliched and over-worked. ..it might be well written but you can do much better than this.
you probably wrote this cos it's cool to nod along with whats concluded bad.