Finally u created a poem on a new field...
so many lives wasting everyday bcoz of this habits
hope they will see this
U gave an awesome message to the society using u'r creativity
Congratz nanga... Keep on the track![]()
Thanks Kasu aiya

Finally u created a poem on a new field...
so many lives wasting everyday bcoz of this habits
hope they will see this
U gave an awesome message to the society using u'r creativity
Congratz nanga... Keep on the track![]()

Thanks Dreamz aiyajeewithey winasha karaganna eka kramayak oyaka..lassnata lyala thiyenawa..thawatha liyanna angel...![]()


Kawiyakin Watina Upadesak dunnata Mage Pranamaya...........
Hebei itin mage killotenam hunu tiakak thiyenawa yaluwe..............

දුම්වැටි :ඊක්:
හොඳ කාලීන නිර්මාණයක් නංගී... ඉදිරියටම යමු...![]()

ThanksMmmnnn,,,,nice one.thanks....
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the first two lines takes away the credibility from this poem nangi ..and its really cliched and over-worked. ..it might be well written but you can do much better than this.
you probably wrote this cos it's cool to nod along with whats concluded bad.
හොඳ උත්සාහයක්..... තව තවත් නිර්මාණ කරන්න සුභ පතනවා.
