දරුණුද අම්මේ..... ( darunuda amme....)

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දරුණුද අම්මේ..... ( darunuda amme....)

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This is a real story which is published in newspapers few months before....:shocked:
 

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    this is a strikingly touchy one akke...a blow right in the face id say...the rawness of this poem accentuates the brutality of this violent act some mothers commit. to convey the essence of it, id say that, you've chosen the right words and style. this couldnt have put forth better. not only it grasps the fate the obvious victim, the baby, of such a violence even before its in this world, but also, i think, it shows the insignificance of the physical pain in the presence of a corrupt cold abominable mentality of a mother who is to commit that sin/crime which manifests the will and atrociousness a mind takes. ...
     

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    දරුණුද අම්මේ.....
    නිවැරදි කල නොහැකි වරදක් කෙසේ හෝ සගවා ගැනිමට ගන්නා, කෙතරම් දරැණු වුවත් සමාජයෙන් බේරිමට කරන්නාවු අවසන් උත්සහායක්... ඔබ වචන වලට පෙරලා ඇත... නිර්මාණය ලස්සනයි නංගි
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    dulhari

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    this is a strikingly touchy one akke...a blow right in the face id say...the rawness of this poem accentuates the brutality of this violent act some mothers commit. to convey the essence of it, id say that, you've chosen the right words and style. this couldnt have put forth better. not only it grasps the fate the obvious victim, the baby, of such a violence even before its in this world, but also, i think, it shows the insignificance of the physical pain in the presence of a corrupt cold abominable mentality of a mother who is to commit that sin/crime which manifests the will and atrociousness a mind takes. ...

    thanks malli
    i was shocked when i saw this article in the news paper
     

    dulhari

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    දරුණුද අම්මේ.....
    නිවැරදි කල නොහැකි වරදක් කෙසේ හෝ සගවා ගැනිමට ගන්නා, කෙතරම් දරැණු වුවත් සමාජයෙන් බේරිමට කරන්නාවු අවසන් උත්සහායක්... ඔබ වචන වලට පෙරලා ඇත... නිර්මාණය ලස්සනයි නංගි
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    godak isthuthi
     

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    නංගිගේ සිතුවිලි දහරේ විසල් පරාසය හොඳින්ම උකහාගත් යථාර්තවාදි කවි නිර්මානයක්...

    නිර්භයව.. තම දෙපයින් නැඟී සිට.. ඇත්ත ඇති සැටියෙන්ම (අමුවෙන්ම) දැකීම මම ඔබගේ නිර්මාන තුලින් විඳිනා මහඟු ගුණාංගයයි..

    ඔබට ජය!!
     

    DiLakshika

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    waradak sidu unata pasuwa a waradin berremata sidu karapu amuma amu thirisan wadak vidiyata mama meka Dakinawa Dul.

    Haganiyak Uththareetara wenne Maw padaviya nisa unath, Maw padaviyata Niga dena me wani dewaluth sidu wena lokayaka Jeevath weemath papayak..
    Apurui
     

    dulhari

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    නංගිගේ සිතුවිලි දහරේ විසල් පරාසය හොඳින්ම උකහාගත් යථාර්තවාදි කවි නිර්මානයක්...

    නිර්භයව.. තම දෙපයින් නැඟී සිට.. ඇත්ත ඇති සැටියෙන්ම (අමුවෙන්ම) දැකීම මම ඔබගේ නිර්මාන තුලින් විඳිනා මහඟු ගුණාංගයයි..

    ඔබට ජය!!

    godak isthuthi ayyia.... me kathawa adahanna bari tharam wedanawak genapu ekak mata
     

    dulhari

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    waradak sidu unata pasuwa a waradin berremata sidu karapu amuma amu thirisan wadak vidiyata mama meka Dakinawa Dul.

    Haganiyak Uththareetara wenne Maw padaviya nisa unath, Maw padaviyata Niga dena me wani dewaluth sidu wena lokayaka Jeevath weemath papayak..
    Apurui

    godak isthuthi dil
     

    dulhari

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    Aya Mavak Nam......!!

    Raagayen Math Novanu Atha.......!
    Jeevayak Nathi Nokaranu Atha.....!


    Aya Thawamath............
    Jeevithayaka Agaya Nodath...........
    Hithuwakkaara Kellekma Vanneya.....!!!!!!

    hmmm eeka athatha hithuwakkara kellek newei mini maruwek.... loke dakalath nathi ahinsaka jeewathayak thamangema athin ma winasa karapu
     

    Doly

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    Yashodarala wage ammala enna rataka me wage pahath wada karana Ammalath ennawada kiyala hithenawa. eth....awasanawakata ennawa neda Dul?

    " Amma " Kiyana Uthum nama monataram Kuriru vidiyala vinasha karalada ?
    samahara vita Amma ehema karanna atte eyage yahapathata unath, ehen ara ahinsaka raru patiyata mokada Une? kisima deyak danne nathuwa a ammage bada athulata wela me loke eliya balanna neda eya unne ??

    Hmmmmmm!

    Dukai kiyawaddi akkiyo
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    dulhari

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    yathaarthaya pennala thiyenawa kampanayak athi wena widihata...sis...awata siddawena dewal balala
    ahala ewa thamunge nirmaana walata yoda ganna eka honda kaviyek ge lakshanayak...bohoma hondai....sis

    godak isthuthi brother
     

    dulhari

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    Yashodarala wage ammala enna rataka me wage pahath wada karana Ammalath ennawada kiyala hithenawa. eth....awasanawakata ennawa neda Dul?

    " Amma " Kiyana Uthum nama monataram Kuriru vidiyala vinasha karalada ?
    samahara vita Amma ehema karanna atte eyage yahapathata unath, ehen ara ahinsaka raru patiyata mokada Une? kisima deyak danne nathuwa a ammage bada athulata wela me loke eliya balanna neda eya unne ??

    Hmmmmmm!

    Dukai kiyawaddi akkiyo
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    godak isthuthi doly... duk wenna epa mewa pilikul karanna