Zeus said:Me kaviya kiyavaddi mata godak deval hithata enava nanagi.
Api koyi tharam pahan,itipandam pattu adura nathi karanna haduvath e hama eliyakma vatakaragena inne aduramayi. e mona velavaka hari pahane dalla nivunama mulu lokema aduren vahagana balagena.
ahase unat 1 taruvak vitharak neveyi tarau pokuru pitin, hadath ekka ekathuvela unat uthsaha karanne adura jayagannama thama
E hama ekakatama vada dasa dahas gananin eliya vihuduvana eka unat tavakalikayi mokada ekat kavada hari davasaka nivila yana nisa.
eth adura sadakalikayi.
Namuth ehema kiyala api pahan pattu nokra inne na, hada taru ira ahase payanne nathuva thiyenne na e mokada e hamoma aduma tharame adura nathi karanna uthsahayakvath karana nisa
E vagemayi api me labichcha minis jevithayeth apita nathi una deval gana duk vevi inne nathuva e deval ganna aduma tharame uthsahayakvath karanna one
Apita e de ganna bari unat
"aduma tarame api uthsaha kara neda ?" kiyala hithala anthima mohothe apita sanasille inna puluvan nisa
oya liyana hama kaviyakama vachana kochchara simple unat jevithayata ganna thiyena deval nam simple na nangi
Great wrk
And thnk u so much for pointing out this nice poem Thanu im really proud of you
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ammatahudu
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