මට පාළුයි .. Mata Palui ( This is my story)

Sanjeewa010

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මට පාළුයි .. Mata Palui ( This is my story)

This is My story.... Based on my Experiance

( mama dannawa meka boladai kiyala.. e bolada bawama thama mage adaraye nature eka.. mama boladai.. mama modai.. mata palui..)

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CoolCartoon

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who the hell saying this is silly ?? childish..hell nah man..this is cool....really you got a talent and you used it with ur experience....good poem machan....hope everything will be cool asap....
 

jayanthah

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Macho, kaviya nam Elamakiri kaviyak hetiyata...............

PS: Umba meka own experience ekak kiwwa hinda mama kiyanne...........kaviya purawatama thiyenne umbe sithuwili wala mamathwaya, selfish bawa, umba katha karannema umba genama witarai...............samaharawita, me selfish bawa hinda wenna ethi eya giye.................sry bro, can feel your pain, but this is my honest observation
 

Sanjeewa010

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jayanthah said:
Macho, kaviya nam Elamakiri kaviyak hetiyata...............

PS: Umba meka own experience ekak kiwwa hinda mama kiyanne...........kaviya purawatama thiyenne umbe sithuwili wala mamathwaya, selfish bawa, umba katha karannema umba genama witarai...............samaharawita, me selfish bawa hinda wenna ethi eya giye.................sry bro, can feel your pain, but this is my honest observation

absolutly correct machan... uba hari.. thanx for the advice
 

Sanjeewa010

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thanx u very much guys.. actually mage kiwwata 100% magema exp neme..
e wunata ubala wage sanvedi minissu inna eka gana mata hari sathutui..
machan... mata ekatai aththatama duka hithenne
 

senewimala1988

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    Machan matath oya wage loku story ekak thiyenava!!!mamath e gena bolanda poem 2k post kala!!!Kochchara bolanda vunath oya cigar ganna wade mama anumatha karanne ne!!!
    Eth nice work ekak!!!!
     

    sagari

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    Hithata dukak kiyala bad addiction nam hodha nahe neda poddak wath ? :no:
    Jeewithe ohoma thama .. Hamotama mokak hari punchi hari problems thiyenawane .. :yes:
    Kaviye vachana bavithaya nam godak hodai ...:)