archirasika said:aaa gangiya kaviyak dala tiyenne...wesmoonu karayo tama okkoma...ekak hite...ekak kate....ekak wate...samaje yana krameta ehemath natuwa bahane nangi..nice poem...!
nadda man ahanne... sutherland.g.m said:mata nam mukuth therenne naha akkke
G2H said:minissu.. samahara dewal hariyata widala nehe malliyoo me apiwath.. eth samaharu.. boruwata yatharthaya dakinne nathuwa.. maha lokuwata loketa penna..ujaruwata innawa...
godak salli handa.. e minissu.. asarana minissunge hitha aduranne nehe, duka danne nehe. eth uparimaya balaporotthu wenawa..
hamathissema .. mama hari kiyala kiyana manussaya.. hitha athulen..thamange.. weraddak thiyena bawa dana dana hanganawa.. ehema aya innawa..
hariyata.. parakku wela nagitala.. maga unnu ekama thanata yana manussaya dihawath nobala.. thamange wahanene.. thaniyema.. yaddi trafic ekata ahuwela lankawata wahana wedi kiyala kegahana samaharu wage...
onna dan harida manda.. ekai kiyanna haduwe..![]()
ireshasy said:yes its true....
nice work gangi.....
G2H said:Damdoo nodamdoo kiyala idala damma 1k he..hee![]()
bahutharayak aya ohoma thamai...![]()
nehe ehema nathuwa puluwan wenna one.....![]()
ekak kiyala, ekak hithe thiyagen inne mokatada.. kiyanna berinum mukuth nokiyawath inna one...nadda man ahanne...

G2H said:minissu.. samahara dewal hariyata widala nehe malliyoo me apiwath.. eth samaharu.. boruwata yatharthaya dakinne nathuwa.. maha lokuwata loketa penna..ujaruwata innawa...
godak salli handa.. e minissu.. asarana minissunge hitha aduranne nehe, duka danne nehe. eth uparimaya balaporotthu wenawa..
hamathissema .. mama hari kiyala kiyana manussaya.. hitha athulen..thamange.. weraddak thiyena bawa dana dana hanganawa.. ehema aya innawa..
hariyata.. parakku wela nagitala.. maga unnu ekama thanata yana manussaya dihawath nobala.. thamange wahanene.. thaniyema.. yaddi trafic ekata ahuwela lankawata wahana wedi kiyala kegahana samaharu wage...
onna dan harida manda.. ekai kiyanna haduwe..![]()


thm14 said:ane manda... therune nallu me modayata oon![]()

aravindalj said:ha ha ha paribogikayange hithanam redenawa thamai hinawenawa erenna monawada karanne
nice thinking & lovely poem
archirasika said:oya tama just begin your life sidter...one day you will realize...edata mama jeewath wela hitiyoth PM ekak danna...hikz....![]()

G2H said:minissu.. samahara dewal hariyata widala nehe malliyoo me apiwath.. eth samaharu.. boruwata yatharthaya dakinne nathuwa.. maha lokuwata loketa penna..ujaruwata innawa...
godak salli handa.. e minissu.. asarana minissunge hitha aduranne nehe, duka danne nehe. eth uparimaya balaporotthu wenawa..
hamathissema .. mama hari kiyala kiyana manussaya.. hitha athulen..thamange.. weraddak thiyena bawa dana dana hanganawa.. ehema aya innawa..
hariyata.. parakku wela nagitala.. maga unnu ekama thanata yana manussaya dihawath nobala.. thamange wahanene.. thaniyema.. yaddi trafic ekata ahuwela lankawata wahana wedi kiyala kegahana samaharu wage...
onna dan harida manda.. ekai kiyanna haduwe..![]()
G2H said:minissu.. samahara dewal hariyata widala nehe malliyoo me apiwath.. eth samaharu.. boruwata yatharthaya dakinne nathuwa.. maha lokuwata loketa penna..ujaruwata innawa...
godak salli handa.. e minissu.. asarana minissunge hitha aduranne nehe, duka danne nehe. eth uparimaya balaporotthu wenawa..
hamathissema .. mama hari kiyala kiyana manussaya.. hitha athulen..thamange.. weraddak thiyena bawa dana dana hanganawa.. ehema aya innawa..
hariyata.. parakku wela nagitala.. maga unnu ekama thanata yana manussaya dihawath nobala.. thamange wahanene.. thaniyema.. yaddi trafic ekata ahuwela lankawata wahana wedi kiyala kegahana samaharu wage...
onna dan harida manda.. ekai kiyanna haduwe..![]()