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eranga_m said:
Ammaaaa..... Nalla PS work anna......... suppa suppa ;)

This poem is far more greater than your previous 2 poems.... ElaKiri :D:D

BTW ko Anah?? api inna nisa teen kiwwada danne na enna epa kiyala :S (jk) :)

Ahhh Tnx a lot bro.. ah PS work... Fazaal ge thread eka balala thama bang....

ah AnAh ... she doesnt gt to use d pc much bng coz my sistr in law hehe.... duka thama...
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    TΞΞNSTAR™ said:

    Ahhh Tnx a lot bro.. ah PS work... Fazaal ge thread eka balala thama bang....

    ah AnAh ... she doesnt gt to use d pc much bng coz my sistr in law hehe.... duka thama...
    :sorry::dull::oo::baffled:

    ah! ehemath cn ekakda......:baffled: haffa........ awlak na ehenam :) puluwan welawaka enna kiyanna....... hehe
     

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    Eranda200 said:
    itz just OK machan.. i still think u can do better wid d poem. :( sorry 2 say it but i think diz z d worst from the three poems.. 1st was elazz

    may ur love bind u immortals in lyf & death... :D

    Ahhhh hehe.. tnx 4 ur opinion machnz.... :D:D:D Jst tell me if threz any point dat would help me to imrpove...

    tnx 4 ur wish!!
     

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    TΞΞNSTAR™ said:

    Ahhhh hehe.. tnx 4 ur opinion machnz.... :D:D:D Jst tell me if threz any point dat would help me to imrpove...

    tnx 4 ur wish!!

    machan 1st of all u hav screwed up ur spellings n grammar dat kinda getz nutty for a reader..:)
    2ndly itz veryy confusing... wel datz nt a point at all after all love is confusing bro ( i think;))
     

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    Elysium said:
    woowe mallio this is an awesome poem dear:love:
    no words 2 explain ur poem & the menaning of the poem, mallo everything is perfect;)
    lol I can't select which line is great cuz all r excellentpa:D
    before u loved anah & after u loved anah mmm great concept 4 ur 3rd peom:)

    I waited 4 this poem till u put the testing thread lol
    & finally
    'u into me & me into u & made both of us a as'
    I didn't got the mening of this line:| if u never mind will u exolian me plz malla?

    Ah Tnx a lot akka... ur words make me blush blush hehhehehe...
    :D:D:D

    tnx a lot akka...

    Ah it took 1 week to complete all thse i mean desiginin nd stuff.. ah
    'u into me & me into u & made both of us a us
    Read it again.. i hope ull gt it ;)
     

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    TΞΞNSTAR™ said:

    Ah Tnx a lot akka... ur words make me blush blush hehhehehe...
    :D:D:D

    tnx a lot akka...

    Ah it took 1 week to complete all thse i mean desiginin nd stuff.. ah
    'u into me & me into u & made both of us a us
    Read it again.. i hope ull gt it ;)
    nope dear inum mandekula erelepa:baffled:
    'both of us as us' endu solla variyama?:confused:
     

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    Nice.... ti's really very nice malli...
    "havin two souls in one heart"
    "nd made both of us a US..."
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