Be Mine

[SIRUS3001]

kollata bokkatama wadila wage.ela ela malli...nice poem

Thnx harshazzzz

 

[thm14]

Ela Elazz
Nice Poem dude
Keep It Up..

 

[SIRUS3001]

Ela Elazz
Nice Poem dude
Keep It Up..

hehehe tnx tnx

 

[twisted]

mata leda wadi karawanna hadanne meka

lede wadi unoth kawith wadi wei wage

 

[SIRUS3001]

lede wadi unoth kawith wadi wei wage

hehe ow beheth nobi hitiyoth pothakma liyanna puluwan wei wage

 

[twisted]

hehe ow beheth nobi hitiyoth pothakma liyanna puluwan wei wage

ya keep writing

 

[SIRUS3001]

ya keep writing

hehee i will i will tnx tnx

 

[GTRZ]

Nice work bro! Keep it up!

 

[SIRUS3001]

Nice work bro! Keep it up!

Thank You Lokkaa

 

[x-pert]

Are you sure malli that this is your own creation?

 

[SIRUS3001]

Are you sure malli that this is your own creation?

Yeah Why???

 

[x-pert]

Yeah Why???

Nope. Then it's OKAY

I have seen this before:

If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.

- Courtney Kuchta - (http://www.lovepoemsandquotes.com/LovePoem03.html)


It's not exactly the same.. I mean word-to-word.

You have tried to make the changes so that you can fool people easily
OR maybe... just maybe.. It can be a co-incident. The same author must have got the same idea like you

(Well... I could remember this poem because this was the 2st poem I sent to a girl some 5 or 6 yrs ago I think)


Nice artwork you have done for a poem by another artist Good job on the Art anyway

Be creative! But don't STEAL others' creation!

 

[SIRUS3001]

Nope. Then it's OKAY

I have seen this before:

If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.

- Courtney Kuchta - (http://www.lovepoemsandquotes.com/LovePoem03.html)


It's not exactly the same.. I mean word-to-word.

You have tried to make the changes so that you can fool people easily
OR maybe... just maybe.. It can be a co-incident. The same author must have got the same idea like you

(Well... I could remember this poem because this was the 2st poem I sent to a girl some 5 or 6 yrs ago I think)


Nice artwork you have done for a poem by another artist Good job on the Art anyway

well i saw the above mention poem before..(u werent the only one sending poems) long ago
I Dont know i rememberd that and wrote just similer one to that
Well I Wrote My First one..and there was just one lyk that ..i saw it afer i wrote...i had nothing to with it
I dont wanna Copy or something..I Wrote this with help of my akki....I spent nearly whole my day i mean i didnt sleep yet for the whole day....still here......so if you think i copied it...it's fine....i'm ok with it........

 

[gayancc]

ela ela

 

[fernandokasu]

nice one malli patto..
dnt gt angry man dannnawane me poem eka liwwe oyamae kiyala. oyage hitha dannawane meka liwwee oya kiyala e hinda kawru mona kiwwath ganana gannepa. ok,, ona kenkta ona deyak kiyanna aythiya thiyenawa, e hamadema oya baaraganna.. hi hi. tawa ehenam ek eke kattiya kocchra hitiyada poems nws paper walin aran liyapu....
moving up brdr
upset wennepa

 

[x-pert]

well i saw the above mention poem before..(u werent the only one sending poems) long ago
I Dont know i rememberd that and wrote just similer one to that
Well I Wrote My First one..and there was just one lyk that ..i saw it afer i wrote...i had nothing to with it
I dont wanna Copy or something..I Wrote this with help of my akki....I spent nearly whole my day i mean i didnt sleep yet for the whole day....still here......so if you think i copied it...it's fine....i'm ok with it........

I believe only what I see
Others will do the same if they are intelligent enough for that...

If it is your creation then don't worry about others' opinions. But if it is a stolen creation, then your heart will blame you for that
Anyway you are the one who knows the truth I said what I saw and I don't think that is a co-incident at all

 

[sirajstc]

nice 1 keep it up puluwan nam oke daala tiyana font eka dennako

 

[sithmini]

heeeyy..nice poemm......keep it up...........