Can U Leave Me4 Alone ??

Doly

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Is it the words I said wrong?
Or have I hurt you so much
I am still waiting for your answer
Please tell me my Love
Can you leave me alone?



Did I not love you right?
Or was it I who always started the fight?
I am still waiting for the answer
Please tell me my Love
Can you leave me alone?



Your presence made me so complete
It decorated my poor life
With faith and care you brought for me
Please tell me my Love
Can you leave me alone?



I wanted to love you right
I wanted to kiss you right
But me idiot couldn't do at all
Please tell me my Love
Can you leave me alone?


Minu
 

jayanthah

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T4EVER said:
Kawru unath ela kavi tika:love:
Eth kawda meyata karadara karanne.

She/he is asking a question...........Can you leave me alone.......or more rightly......would you be able to do that???............eyata kawuruth karadara karanawa nevey.......eyata dukai, the other half is leaving him/her alone........

Eka neda kathawa??

Whatever, this is nicely articualted poem........your confusion is nicely worded, well done.............keep on writing:yes:
 

Doly

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jayanthah said:
She/he is asking a question...........Can you leave me alone.......or more rightly......would you be able to do that???............eyata kawuruth karadara karanawa nevey.......eyata dukai, the other half is leaving him/her alone........

Eka neda kathawa??

Whatever, this is nicely articualted poem........your confusion is nicely worded, well done.............keep on writing:yes:

Thanks dear, thank u so much
i think u understood me well. i dnt knw this poem is nice or not.
but i tried my best to express my feeling.
& also i am a girl.