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silentsahan

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  • Apr 28, 2010
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    Rajagiriya
    hr ge addrs eka...
    (e kiyanne oba thumeege)
    dine...

    lokkage addrs eka...


    dear sir,

    request 4 a salary increment

    this is to draw to ur knd attention to a critical
    problem that The HR dep has faced in attracting and retaining
    valuable human resource in the company .
    As u r aware recently employees have started demanding higher
    salaries to be in par with the others who are in the same job
    functions in similar organizations .. major reason for this has
    been the increased cost of living and
    scarcity of talented human resource who r competent enough to to perform
    the relevant job functions efficiently and effectively...

    continuing of existing salary scales would inevitably result in a higher employee
    turnover .. ( sewakayan hara yama)
    and this would lead the company critical situation ...
    ur immediate attention is required ...(samanaly oya asst HR nam *** to solve this problem..***
    kiyala danna..nathnam epa..)

    urs,
    faithfully ,
    samanaly...( nama danna thanathura newe..)






    wait samanalyo......
     
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    kosandpol

    Well-known member
  • Jun 10, 2008
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    hr ge addrs eka...
    (e kiyanne oba thumeege)
    dine...

    lokkage addrs eka...


    dear sir,

    request 4 a salary increment

    this is to draw to ur knd attention to a critical
    problem that The HR dep has faced in attracting and retaining
    valuable human resource in the company .
    As u r aware recently employees have started demanding higher
    salaries to be in par with the others who are in the same job
    functions in similar organizations .. major reason for this has
    been the increased cost of living and
    scarcity of talented human resource who r competent to perform
    the relevant job functions efficiently and effectively...




    wait samanalyo......
    oh and dont use sms short hand in official letters.
     

    silentsahan

    Well-known member
  • Apr 28, 2010
    9,737
    1
    3,658
    113
    Rajagiriya
    hr ge addrs eka...
    (e kiyanne oba thumeege)
    dine...

    lokkage addrs eka...


    dear sir,

    request 4 a salary increment

    this is to draw to ur knd attention to a critical
    problem that The HR dep has faced in attracting and retaining
    valuable human resource in the company .
    As u r aware recently employees have started demanding higher
    salaries to be in par with the others who are in the same job
    functions in similar organizations .. major reason for this has
    been the increased cost of living and
    scarcity of talented human resource who r competent enough to to perform
    the relevant job functions efficiently and effectively...

    continuing of existing salary scales would inevitably result in a higher employee
    turnover .. ( sewakayan hara yama)
    and this would lead the company critical situation ...
    ur immediate attention is required ...(samanaly oya asst HR nam *** to solve this problem..***
    kiyala danna..nathnam epa..)

    urs,
    faithfully ,
    samanaly...( nama danna thanathura newe..)