GAME OVER

[asta]

realy a good poem.

 

[nuwanoo7]

max machan ............................. niyama adahasa...................... hithanna deyak ethurukarala thiyanawa................

 

[cha_sl]

appatasirei , mata.. game epppaaunaa...

 

[Billl Gates]

sad

 

[x-pert]

Nice machang bro Seriously you've done a nice creation machang.

ohoma thamai neda godak aya?

Mona de unath kisi gaanak naha thamunge jeewitha gana witharai hithanne godak wita..... Sad situ. But true

 

[asanka10]

atta thamai itin.......................

 

[pamithK]

Nice one.....so close to reality............
Yet....as a budding poet, dont try to ride too close to the reality, you might end up as a commercial artists, a true poet live & die for poems....not anything else...

You got talent, improve them..........keep on writing......good luck

THANK YOU.. But i'm still confused as to how being close to reality will make me a commercial poet..you see i dont categorize myself as anyone..i just write what i feel ..so if you can elaborate on that point it'll be helpful

 

[pamithK]

thnx to everbody for da comments

 

[pamithK]

Nice machang bro Seriously you've done a nice creation machang.

ohoma thamai neda godak aya?

Mona de unath kisi gaanak naha thamunge jeewitha gana witharai hithanne godak wita..... Sad situ. But true

thnx ayya

 

[Shameer]

nice one.......

Nice newei ban paw wada owa !!!!!!!!!

 

[DJ.Parker]

appa me thiyenne niyama ewa!
keep it up mucho

 

[DJ.Parker]

Nice newei ban paw wada owa !!!!!!!!!

mona kiyonawada manda meya

Nice one.....so close to reality............
Yet....as a budding poet, dont try to ride too close to the reality, you might end up as a commercial artists, a true poet live & die for poems....not anything else...

You got talent, improve them..........keep on writing......good luck

need an explaination

u remind me a metaller

 

[AL1717]

hmmmmmmmmmm!!!!

 

[howitzer]

nice one

 

[CoolCartoon]

this is great machan......ahinsaka minissu bomba walata ahuwela marila yaddi...ape ratema ekthara palanthiyak mura daagena a mokuth nodanna ganata winoda wenawa....reality....

greta machan....

 

[lasanka]

kewl!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Aragorn]

niz one!!!

 

[waleryan]

niyamai machan.........