guyz pls tell me what u think about this melody?

[coolmusic]

hi. my friend made this melody. it supposed to be a kind of a hip hop thing!!! what do u think about this?

(please download and listen)

thanks.

 

[melakamc]

balala kiyannam!

 

[melakamc]

gindara machan!!habai thanin thana poddak break wenawa wagei ne!!!nice work!!

 

[Vishwalisha]

niyama melody ekak!!
give this to an artist.. he might be interested

 

[coolmusic]

gindara machan!!habai thanin thana poddak break wenawa wagei ne!!!nice work!!

machan, adupadu denena ewa monawada kiyala kiyanna balanna.

1st part ekai 2nd part ekai match wenne ne wage da?

 

[Djpata]

hi bro, nice melody ... still it's in da basics ryt? cz i cnt hear any bass & there are some more mistakes too but im nt a pro so some 1 else will tell wht they are ... but the melody is sweet ... tell ur friend to improve it! you guys can do a song for it good luck!

 

[coolmusic]

niyama melody ekak!!
give this to an artist.. he might be interested

thanks machan

 

[coolmusic]

hi bro, nice melody ... still it's in da basics ryt? cz i cnt hear any bass & there are some more mistakes too but im nt a pro so some 1 else will tell wht they are ... but the melody is sweet ... tell ur friend to improve it! you guys can do a song for it good luck!

thanks machan. yes its just played using the keyboard. machan, pls tell me what are the mistake u see? do u see any mistakes in composition? or just the playing mistakes?

 

[isuruimg]

machan MP3 eka daapanko

 

[coolmusic]

machan MP3 eka daapanko

thanks machan

 

[Djpata]

thanks machan. yes its just played using the keyboard. machan, pls tell me what are the mistake u see? do u see any mistakes in composition? or just the playing mistakes?

macho i dnt hv professional knowledge in music so ill tell u wht i see...

piano parts quantize wela na in most places
oyage friend meka eka digatada play kale? temp out ekak wage therenawa ... etc

 

[coolmusic]

macho i dnt hv professional knowledge in music so ill tell u wht i see...

piano parts quantize wela na in most places
oyage friend meka eka digatada play kale? temp out ekak wage therenawa ... etc

ah thanks machan. yes meka ekadigata play kale. thanks adupadu kiwata machan. i'l tell him to correct them.

 

[chint]

nice
but poddak out yanawa

 

[isuruimg]

machan eka nam patta meka thaama nikan play karapu ekak witharai ne meka elata hadala gaththanam elazzz start eka nam kora sure naa machan meka kawuruhari ussaida kiyala

 

[Djpata]

ah thanks machan. yes meka ekadigata play kale. thanks adupadu kiwata machan. i'l tell him to correct them.

elakiri machan! good luck .. but podi advice ekak .. dnt post new melodies in public ... demo ekka wath post karanna kiyala mama kiyanen na cz me kale hema thenama horu

 

[spenzar]

පදිරි

 

[coolmusic]

nice
but poddak out yanawa

thanks chint, yes i will correct it

 

[coolmusic]

machan eka nam patta meka thaama nikan play karapu ekak witharai ne meka elata hadala gaththanam elazzz start eka nam kora sure naa machan meka kawuruhari ussaida kiyala

hehe aththa thamai. thanks machan balala wishtara kiwwata

 

[coolmusic]

elakiri machan! good luck .. but podi advice ekak .. dnt post new melodies in public ... demo ekka wath post karanna kiyala mama kiyanen na cz me kale hema thenama horu

thanks machan. aththa thamai. ikmanta song ekak hadanna ona dan ithin hehehe

 

[isuruimg]

hehe aththa thamai. thanks machan balala wishtara kiwwata

puluwannam ain karapan horen gaththoth aparaade