I gave my heart to a girl

[SlimThug]

I gave my heart to a girl
Thinking that she would give me hers'
But she just walked away from me
Taking my heart with her
Leaving an empty hole in me
Which caused me so mush pain
That I thought my ribcage would break
I looked around but only found
A stone that would fit in that space
The pain I had was unbearable
So I grabbed that stone
And put it in my bosom
It's heavier than my heart
And harder than I thought
But it fills the hole and eases the pain
So please don't disgusts me saying
I have a heart of stone...

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[DJ ASHAN]

wow

 

[twisted]

wow nice idea ..but you have to keep writing so other things will improve in time

 

[nagaya]

i think better to put a pump instead on stone......

 

[Nisha.hasanthi]

hmmm..nice

 

[tbartz]

LOWETH NA

 

[Doly]

hmmmmmmm!
touching one

 

[amithpeiris]

mummmmmm

 

[SlimThug]

Thanx all.....

 

[Zeus]

Hmm good poem
All i have to say
aparade umba dunne

 

[SlimThug]

Hmm good poem
All i have to say
aparade umba dunne

Matath Den thamai therenneee

 

[LAPD]

nice poem