hehe this covers the entire process of a funeral..but since nobody can know what it would be like from the dead guys end i guess this is still apearing like to be from the view point of a third party...nice attempt bro ..very nice and pretty much have everything covered ..keep going ...btw this reminds me of a song lol
"they're cracking the cross where they hammer the nail
pennies they laid on the windows that failed
not really gone, but I'm so far away
all of your prayers cried at once all too late
once you fall down, end the round
end the round"