LETS WRITE A LOVE STORY LINE BY LINE

Nash_Node

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  • Apr 2, 2008
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    Staring at my laptop
    freon said:
    the black box with the monitor that looked like the first apple machintosh computer was reading strange charractors with beep signal that sounded remotely like a human heart beat patter.

    roshans body was almost unidentifiable as a human body, his hand was hanging on the side of the blood wetted bed..the creatures eyes were fully black gleamed like a polished "gil bola" :P.... and jaws had come out of the face a bit so that it can opened more widely like a anacondas jaws..it shrugged off the wires attached to the body, and the sailine bottle shatterd on the floor..

    kirimakina's scream was heard across the ward, but for the other workers it was normal that newly admitted patients screamin with pain after they wake up from from the 1st painkiller dose...

    P.S poor roshan should've just crossed the road and gone home :P

    Hearing the sound reverberate through the room.. the creature quickly tuned his head.. his monstrous eyes focused and rested on the shivering Kirimanika's body ! ...

    Tap.. tap.. tap... tap... as he walked slowly across the room with his two feet tapping the steel claws on tiles....."tap ...."tap...."tap....tap"

    The creature closed his face towards her's.. with acid saliva drooling from his formidable jaws and steel K9's, the creature opened it's mouth to rip Ranmanika in two !

    "szzzzzwwwwooooossshhhhhhh" .. all of a sudden out of nowhere there came an almost invisible lazer beam throwing the Alien off balance and falling on it's wake.

    Ranmanika turned her head to see who it was...

    At a corner of the room.. slowly letting down the shield of molecular atoms and nano sphere technology which made him invisible.... there stood..

    aliens-predator-requiem12.jpg




    btw.. polished "gil bola" :lol: :lol: ,, that's classic ! :lol: :lol:
     
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    twisted

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    Nash_Node said:
    Hearing the sound reverberate through the room.. the creature quickly tuned his head.. his monstrous eyes focused and rested on the shivering Kirimanika's body ! ...

    Tap.. tap.. tap... tap... as he walked slowly across the room with his two feet tapping the steel claws on tiles....."tap ...."tap...."tap....tap"

    The creature closed his face towards her's.. with acid saliva drooling from his formidable jaws and steel K9's, the creature opened it's mouth to rip Ranmanika in two !

    "szzzzzwwwwooooossshhhhhhh" .. all of a sudden out of nowhere there came an almost invisible lazer beam throwing the Alien off balance and falling on it's wake.

    Ranmanika turned her head to see who it was...

    At a corner of the room.. slowly letting down the shield of molecular atoms and nano sphere technology which made him invisible.... there stood..

    aliens-predator-requiem12.jpg




    btw.. polished "gil bola" :lol: :lol: ,, that's classic ! :lol: :lol:

    stood suicide_knight (ranjan ramanayaka) silently blowing the last fragmentation of smoke off his lazor gun's mouth..

    taking a long yet slow step towards ranmanika, who by this time, was almost mesmerized by the unexpected return of her childhood valentine, suicide_knight, said "bayawenda epa nangi"(do not fear)...

    laying gagging to breathe on a puddle of blood, ranmanika's mind took a few steps back on her past to remember the first valentine day they spent together, it seemed a million years ago to her, the roses he had given her still seemed to shine in red right infront of her eyes to her, in spite of the coldness of the room she felt the warmth of the movie theatre in which she first kissed suicide_knight for the first time.

    turning to red from sudden journy back through her mind, she laid her eyes upon the suicide_knight whispering "sudu ayya" to herself, who by this time was checking on the creature from a safe distant. and coincidently in the same time he turned his eyes down to find ranmanika's eyes fixed solidly on his..

    a lightening struck his mind ...as the lazor gun collapsed down to the floor he took off to take her shaking body in his arms...

    regaining his consciousness, the creature with broken ribs and melted joints and nuts opened his eyes to find ranmanika making out with suicide_knight passionately as if they were in a teeny romantic flick ..and a robotic hiss came out of his mouth, dripping with blood saliva saying "what the ....."