lonely pain
nicely expressed your feeling
nice poem brother

its really a fine piece of art meth... ane machan tharaha wenna epa , there are few mistakes so pay attention to it coz its really better for u... k., ane please don't get upset coz this is just a humble advice for u. keep it up , great friend and write more and more... coz u have the talent..! God bless !
... Please be kind enough and show me my mistakes ... It may really hlpful for me
