Life was...

[too_little]

Here is another one for you guyz!!
The basic meaning of this poem is that you does not need thousand people to change your life but simply only one person CAN change your life.
Comment or Bump
Thanks!

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[waima]

BUMP.....

 

[prabo22]

 

[darshana4u]

Elazzzzzzz

 

[malkavi]

you does not need thousand people to change your life but simply only one person CAN change your life.

ඇත්ත ...ඇත්තා....

 

[Dead Island]

this poem doesn't make sense how come
life was insignificant as far as you stepped in?
beside as far as idiomatic is often used for mentioning
some extent
I am not quite sure about the thing in which you wanna say
but as far as I concern it ought to be corrected like this way
"then you came to my life", or "then you camped in my heart"

 

[too_little]

this poem doesn't make sense how come
life was insignificant as far as you stepped in?
beside as far as idiomatic is often used for mentioning
some extent
I am not quite sure about the thing in which you wanna say
but as far as I concern it ought to be corrected like this way
"then you came to my life", or "then you camped in my heart"

i didn't want to write 'till twice so i replaced it with as far as..i checked and it gave me that and also i wanted mention the life got better right after when that person came to someone's(her/his) life
btw i think your way is right too..thanks for pointing it out

 

[thomian]

 

[rcccc]

bump

 

[Dinushasankalpa]

you does not need thousand people to change your life but simply only one person CAN change your life

 

[Dinushasankalpa]

lassanai..tawa liyanna hodata

 

[Dinushasankalpa]

bump 1

 

[twisted]

I'm sorry but fuckedup english in this poem is giving the exact opposite meaning of what you meant.
this poem is a failure. (if you can call it a poem that is)
try harder.

 

[charly123]

simply only one person CAN change your life.
Thanks!

 

[Mal Baba]

nice one nangi

 

[rcccc]

sure ද එක්කෙනෙයි කියලා

 

[charly123]

sure ද එක්කෙනෙයි කියලා

hmm ow

 

[rcccc]

hmm ow

ela ela

 

[charly123]

ela ela

ela ne ban

 

[sarinda100]